Harry's so mean to Samara! Report Review
Woah - a very creepy but good start. You get the gothic air of the chapter going right from the start, and maintain it throughout. It's horrible and chilling how Voldemort kills Samara's family, but in a good way as far as creating a scary story goes. I've never been a vampire fan, but this story has hooked me straight away with it's merciless shockingness, right from Voldemort's murder of Samara's mother and poor Andrew to her greif-driven attack on the hooded figures (Death Eaters?) and the revelation that she's a vampire.
Your grammar is mostly good, but remember to put a new line when someone else starts talking. Overall, a blood-chilling start, but in a good way. Nice job! Report Review
*holds her blankie tight* WHAT!?!?I CANT BELIEVE SAMARA GOT BITCHY im not being motherly, but i was shocked Report Review
knew harrison was her father when she was thinking she reconized him. 10/10 Report Review
I like her,she's feisty!
you should read a book called twilight.it's really popular in virginia.Author's Response: ha yea.by stephenie meyer? i've read that series, its really awesome. im glad u like it! Report Review
I love this story and am about to read the sequel! It has taken me a while to finish because I clicked to go to 18 and it wouldn't let me for the longest time! I didn't want to miss out on the good stuff! It's very well written and I love how you protray feelings. It's all fast paced but friggin' awesome! I love it and that's all I have to say.
~Becks/Rebbie~Author's Response: thank you! I hope you enjoy the sequel! Report Review
Incredible! Amazing! and all those other cool sounding words!!
~Wicked_SisterAuthor's Response: thanks! im glad u like it :) Report Review
Hey! Im Neko_Angel428! i have already read this story with my best buddy Will_Semra, and i still love it!!! AHh! nice ending by the way. :)
Anyways, Will_Semra had some problems with her computer but wanted to ask you...You see she is writing a book and would love to use the name Samara in it. Is that alright? i mean she says she can give you all the credit for the idea and everything. yup. so if you can tell me, ill tell her so she can wonder to change the names of the character. Thanks!
OH...by the way...(whispers) write more on Black Roses Red.its getting really good! :)
Neko_Angel Author's Response: does she just wanna use the name or the character? i wouldnt mind if she used the name, since i dont really own it. but if she wants to use samara as a character, i would really prefer her to wait until i finished Black Roses Red. cuz then it wont be too confusing to me. lol. but yea, if she wants the name, tell her to go for it. thanks for askin tho! and im glad u like my stories! :) Report Review
HEllO! member me? well, i have read the story already but i still love it! So when i heard that you wanted a banner, i made you one! hehe...hope you like it, and by the way you don't have to use it. :D i just really like this story! :)
~Will_SemraAuthor's Response: that is so rad! omg ty so much! this totally made my day. and ill totally use it, i dont know what happened to my other one. i just logged on one day and it was gone...weird. but anyways, thanks sooooooooo much! oh! and im so glad u like my story! eek, its so weird, someone likes my story. i think i need to let that sink in a bit. hehe, im soo excited. thanks! Report Review
absolutely brilliant! I know.i have already read this BUT! i love reading it again! Great Job. :D
~Will_SemraAuthor's Response: Thank you! Report Review
AHA! I knew it! I was Right, I was! w00t w00t! *proudness*
Author's Response: lol good for u! Report Review
Is the Harrison dude her father? Just a question, curiosity...Author's Response: lol good guess. Report Review
Loved the story! Wonderful job. Your definitely a good writer. It would be totally awesome if you were able to write a book. Cause I would totally buy it.
Author's Response: Thank you! i'm glad u enjoyed it! You just made my day :) Report Review
I really liked this chapter. The end of it was a total surprise for me. I didn't expect Prof. Harrison to do that. I actually she was going to fight Cho.Author's Response: im glad u liked it :) Report Review
nice ending, but what did the letter say? Author's Response: eh, u know, the usual. "(harry) I love you Samara! (samara, thinking) No, I love you MORE Harry! " hehe, but nah, nothing to special. im glad u liked it though. Report Review
no no no no no! it's very good! it brings the whole story together!Author's Response: thank you! Report Review
uh oh, daddy's home! but if it's harrison, i may scream!Author's Response: ha, seriously. Report Review
no! i knew he was a creep! die harrison die! but good chappie!Author's Response: lol thanks Report Review
hey, i just thought... does harrison suffer from skitzo? just a question... poor harry, got stood up by his date.Author's Response: haha, nah, he's just weird, but he has his own reasons, i guess. Report Review
im really scared of harrison now! and i just thought i'd let you know that madame malkin's shop is in diagon alley. but it's good otherwise.Author's Response: gosh, i always do get the details wrong. sorry. its been awhile since i read the books, but thanks for telling me. Report Review
yay! i love romances! god, where'd you think up all this great material? Author's Response: eh, i don't know. I guess I just write what I wish would happen to me. lol romance wise, i mean. hehe, but im glad u like it! Report Review
yay, cho got her butt kicked again! me loves this story!Author's Response: lol thank you, im glad u do! Report Review
oooh, is samara gonna sign up for this competition? or harry, perhaps? good chappie.Author's Response: nice guess. thanks. Report Review
yeah! i love a good cat fight! and thank god that cho got her butt kicked! otherwise i may have stopped reading! (jk) very good, i don't like cho at all, btw, so this story rocks!Author's Response: ah! a fellow cho-hater! yay! Report Review
EK! now im happy! that really made my day! poor malfoy, that's rather hitting below the belt, what she did to him. literally!
Author's Response: lol glad it did. Report Review
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