Wow...I'm giving this a 10 Erin! Report Review
How in the world did this story get rated so low? Erin - this is very good writing indeed. Taking a character we only really know by name...and taking on the challenge of writing her in the first person is a big one....but you pulled it off completely. I don't know if you write much, but you should (and keep writing, I mean that sincerely). Your writing has real life to it. There are few things more difficult than conveying the turmoil within someone's mind mixed with the hope that struggles through....I don't understand at all why this doesn't have more stars....it's exceptional. Report Review
I LOVED it!!
You HAVE to update soon!
VERY good! i LOVE it! i hope u update soon! that would be PERFECT! hehe! well, good job!
Hugs n kisses n lollies,Lani Report Review
Oh, please, please-don\'t leave me in despair-write mooooooooooooooooooooooore, i alroeady read the prequel, i want the seqel! Report Review
This is great. Please write lots more. It could be incredible. Report Review
I loved this one. It was so touching and you captured the mood perfectly! Are you going to continue this one? Please?
Rayya Report Review
OMG!!! I love this! This was a great Idea!
~M! Report Review
OMG!!! That was so0o0o0o0o0o0o0 sweet! I loved this idea! Please! write a sequel or something!!!!!! um if you have time could u read my fic? \"Unexpected Darkness\" PLEASE? I\'d really like ur input and advice! THANX!
~Katy Report Review
I luved this! I love reading things about characters that aren\'t a main part of the story! THIS WAS A GREAT IDEA!!!!!!! if you have time could you read and review my story \"The Dream\" I\'d really like some feedback from you!
~Magnolia Report Review
Erin, that\'s so good! It\'s nice that you\'re doing fanfics about different characters rather than the main characters like Harry, Draco, Hermoine, etc. It\'s very good and I\'d like to see more fanfics from you :) :) :) You rule!!!!!!!!
Luv Steph Report Review
Oh my gosh, that was amazing. I live the way you began that using the drawing as an anecdote! You really have a lot of talent, and using Alicia Spinnet as Harry\'s admirer!
Fantastic girl! Keep writing!
:) Rei/Isobel Report Review
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