Aww, this was so cute! I did, however, notice a few grammatical errors but I think that this is an older one shot!

It is so sweet though, imagine if Lily, James and Sirius really did meet like that! Awh! :') 10/10

Emma xx

Author's Response: Yeah I wrote this several years before I even posted it on here. So probably somewhere 2002? Maybe before? thanks so much for the review!

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Oh, that was so cute! Really, I loved it! Great job!

Author's Response: Haha, thank you so much!

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awe thats just adorable(: haha i love how sirius endend up in it too.. and how mrs evans and mrs potter knew each other..thats just adorable(:

Author's Response: I love this story. It was one of my original short stories for fanfic. Thanks so much for the review!

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That was officially the best story I have ever read. I loved it so much, and laughed a lot. :) Thank you.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked it! Sometimes I forget it's there, but I really love it when I look back at it. Thank you!

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awh. (:
that was adorable. (:

Author's Response: I keep forgetting about this story. It seems like ages ago...I actually wrote it several years before I even posted it on the site. Thanks :)

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i love this story
lily was the cutest thing ever
i thought i was going to cry
~cassie

Author's Response: Aw, I'm so glad you liked it! Thank you so much!

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that was so cute! adorable little james and sirius :) 10/10

Author's Response: god I wrote this so long ago I completely forgot about it. Thank you so much for the review!

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hi there :) merry review a thon!

This was extremely cute!! I loved howfamiliar characters kept cropping up and the trick or treat competition! Really adorable and very true to how kids behave!!

CC: sometimes I felt lily sounded older than she was, in some of her dialogue with her mum... I don't think they'd openly talk about their dislike for petunia...

Other than that, really lovely one-shot :) 7/10

Oh and a side note: "Holy cricket" hasn't really been used in england since 1950 or so... It made me giggle to see James say it so sincerely. May I suggest "crikey" instead?

Author's Response: haha I wrote this story years ago so I'll have to go back through it and see what you were talking about. I always thought James would be a bit goofy and actually use "holy cricket" because he thought it was silly.

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Cute!cool!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, it was fun to write

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young sirius and james haven't changed a bit, have they? funny.

Author's Response: Thank you, I can't remember when I got this idea but it was so much fun to write!

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Omg i was talk into the real diamond on the phone and she was all READ IT so I was all okay and so i did.i like it. I think boys are now bad witches!

Author's Response: Aww thanks! I'm glad you liked it

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yo dizzle? i am confizzled. never mind.

anywhos, cool story. it was pretty cool.

Author's Response: I wrote that entirely too long ago. Thanks!

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wow! that was good! ... I WANT MORE CHAPPIES!!! PLZPLZPLZ!!??.TWINKIE!!!. AH! IM TURNING INTO AMANDA! SAVE MEH!!!... im random O_o

Author's Response: Amanda? Haha, it was a one-shot :) Thank you!

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Yo dizzle!

Fo shizzle ma nizzle!

Author's Response: yes, that's the general idea, haha. Thank you!

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aw that's so cute!! i really liked it

10/10

Author's Response: thank you so much!

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Cute and fluffy ... perfecto!

Author's Response: I think every once in a while we need a bit of fluff :)

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awee, how cute, lol
hope another update is comming soon! later for now
Blackheart09

Author's Response: Aww, it's a one shot, I'm sorry. But you can read my other stuff if you want! Thanks so much!

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Lily doesn't kno what she's saying Kames andher are going to lived happy ever after!

Author's Response: Of course she does, Kames is adorable :) haha thank you for the review

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that was pretty kool but u said it was at a party where was the party huh huh well gtg bbbye

from
xxx weasley xxx

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lmfao yo dizzle! haha...LOVED this story, it was FAB. lily was so cute bless her, and James wiff the no kissing...The way yu worded it was great. Its an interesting thought actually...thats probably what would have happened if they met when they were young ^_^
Alex xx

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! :) I bet it would have happened when they were younger ;)

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well there is just one word for your story CUTE very cute . i just loved it.
11/10

Author's Response: aww thank you! I loved writing it

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Aw...that was so cute!

Is Lily's mother related to the magical world in any way?

10/10

~ Leah

Author's Response: Nah, she's not. She should be though :) Thank you!

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Aww..it was so sweet. Lovely job!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

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Oh my gosh that was so cute!! I loved it! This was really well written and I can totally imagine it happening sometime! I loved it! I really can't say anything other than it was perfect! But just a note- in the very beginning, on the first line of dialogue you forgot the quotation marks. You might want to go back and fix that, otherwise its good. Gah I loved this! So innocent and sweet! It's definitely on my favorites!

Author's Response: Haha! Thanks about the quotes! It helped out a lot. Also, thanks for the review :)

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Janice, that was like, adorable to the max!

I've never read a story that portrayed James, Lily, Sirius, and Petunia as little kids. It was way cute, and it paints a nice little picture of how James and Lily met. Thanks for such a nice read!

~Leah

Author's Response: Hey you're adorable to the max too! One of these days I'm going to read your stories when I'm not drowsy and falling asleep!! haha.

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