Description and dialogue would make it even better. Report Review
FANTASTAROONEY Report Review
wow its good but i find myself doubting if it will ever be updated after 3 years...hmmmm its good though Report Review
DANG!! Long!! This is the first Humor, huh? 10/10 Report Review
cant write much my brother is going to kick me off soon but i like your story i hope you write more soon bye Report Review
It is very, very good and well written! You should write more! Although I think it would work better in General, seeing as there isn\'t too much humor in it(that wasn\'t a put-down). Report Review
It is really,really GOOD!!!!!!!!! Report Review
You need to shut up oliversgirl or wotever ur name is. I thought it was good and I doubt you know much about hp since ur not jk rowling Report Review
its not really funny. maybe you should like read more or summat. thats how we became better writers. work on it and when you do write again, don't drang and add more comical actions and dialoge. and the thing with Harry doesn't make any sense. and Hogwarts students don't get new options as far as I know and I konw a LOT about HP! Report Review
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