20 Reviews Found

Review #1, by KimMalfoy 

3rd August 2005:
Oh stupid Harry! He did feel something, why can't he just tell her? *cries* Omg, this is so sad...

Author's Response: Yeah, well you know. He's just being Harry. You know boys, they can't express themselves properly.

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Review #2, by mai 

4th July 2005:
kathy..even though I dun understand the story, U still did a good job about it!!..

Author's Response: lol haha, thanks mai :D

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Review #3, by TxA_GunFighter 

17th May 2005:
Someone needs to knock some since into that boy. gunny

Author's Response: Haha, I agree. Thanks for reviewing.

Author's Response: Haha, I agree. Thanks for reviewing.

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Review #4, by Potterholic 

4th May 2005:
HURRY UP!!! I cant wait for the next chapter! it's been long since the last one.... please...

Author's Response: I'm sorry. Chapter 16 is up, and updated with 17.

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Review #5, by harryandhermione_4eva 

1st May 2005:
still nothing.. nothing at all.. no update.. NOTHING!!! PLEASE HURRY!!!

Author's Response: I'm reallly reaally sorry! I don't know what's up...i promise i'll check it out.

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Review #6, by 204 

25th April 2005:
This is a great chapter and all, but doesn't making Ron Harry's replacement kinda contridict his punishment?

Author's Response: Yes, you're right. But, Professor McGonagall put Ron as a replacement for a reason. I know what you mean. It doesn't make sense how - Ron's the reason Harry can't play and be captain...and now he becomes the replacement. Maybe McGonagall didn't choose the replacement....

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Review #7, by Pumpkin juice 

22nd April 2005:
Brilliant chapter!! Nice vocab and well written too! Can't wait for the next! :D 10/10!

Author's Response: Thanks for being so faithful pumpkin juice!!

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Review #8, by zoe 

15th April 2005:
good chapter though.

Author's Response: Gah! thanks for the review, but i'd like to have more info please

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Review #9, by zoe 

15th April 2005:
THAT'S NOT FAIR! NOW HERMIONE'S GOING TO BE ALL HURT AND MOPE ABOUT AND BE MAD AT HARRY! NOT FAIR!

Author's Response: I agree, but life's full of hurt and sorrow.. Don't worry, all will be well soon.

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Review #10, by harryandhermione_4eva 

14th April 2005:
Can you pls hurry with the update!!! I've been cheking back for weeks and there's still nothing! Please, take it as I'm begging you, please update!!!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I've been really really busy!! I promise I will asap

Author's Response: I'm so sorry! I've been really really busy!! I promise I will asap

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Review #11, by Her Stubborn Lioness 

8th April 2005:
Oh, this is so bittersweet! Poor Harry--having to find the key to his power and having to defeat Voldemort in less than a year. Not to mention he's already dying, Ron hates his guts, and his growing feelings for Hermione. Doesn't look like the guy ever gets a break! I like the way you're doing this story--not a rushed romance like I've seen in a lot of romance stories. (There's no doubt in my mind that if Harry's going to fall in love, it would take quite a while--so you're portraying it very well!) If you're taking ideas for songs for Harry to write down in his journal, I've got a suggestion: 'Weapon' by Matthew Goodband--it fits Harry's feelings of him being used as just something to beat the bad guys. (If you don't know the lyrics and want to know what they are, just tell me and I'll leave them in another reveiw!) Thanks for reading! --HSL

Author's Response: Wow, thanks for the lovely review! Yes please I'd like to know about that song! I may use it in my other story :D

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Review #12, by danfan4ever 

8th April 2005:
Harry is such a dumb butt! He just broke Hermione's heart! Arrgh!

Author's Response: I agree! thanks for the review :)

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Review #13, by Prefect Gryffindor 

6th April 2005:
all the feelings...

Author's Response: Yeah, haha. Too much?

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Review #14, by WindDrake 

6th April 2005:
Woah...Thats so cool! Update soon please :D

Author's Response: Thanks! Truly :) I'll update as soon as the chapter's Beta'd

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Review #15, by Bellamybabe 

6th April 2005:
Excellent story... very incaptivating... update soon, please....Bb

Author's Response: Wow, thankyou for reviewing ;) I'm glad you like my story. Update should be very soon.

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Review #16, by hpfan 

6th April 2005:
it was incredible. plz hurry with 16 i can't wait 2 see wat happens!

Author's Response: A promise is a promise ;) Thanks for reviewing, chapter 16 is coming up vERY soon.

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Review #17, by Mrs Harry Potter 

6th April 2005:
yeahhhh. Go Hermione.... yeah Harry sucks...

Author's Response: Yeah, lol. Harry does suck at the moment. But he can't really help it. He hasn't really had much of a life has he? I do feel for Hermione though. Things are going to be way different after this chapter......

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Review #18, by harryandhermione_4eva 

5th April 2005:
Heya! I love your story! It rocks!!! U have a special way of weaving in songs with meanings! Great job!:) Keep the stories coming!:)

Author's Response: Wowiee! thanks heaps! Songs are great ways to express meaning :) :) glad you like it.

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Review #19, by micking 

5th April 2005:
not being able to walk, and do the things he wants, makes him feel like he is not whole. As long as he feels this way, even the idea of being in love with someone will torture him making him feel less of a man. I hope he can get his legs back under him and begin to heal. Then, and only then, will he feel whole again. I am sorry for Hermoine. She is in love with him and he is in love with her but there is too much pain going on right now.

Author's Response: I think you're on the right track micking!!! You are totally right about Harry's emotion...although there could be more...

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Review #20, by roxy baby 

5th April 2005:
that was deep man, and that last sentence, cut right through me! how could he not!!! ugh i just wanna smack him upside the head sheesh, how in the world can he go on like that, he's dead!!

Author's Response: Yeah, thanks for reviewing roxy babe! Yeah, Harry may need a wake up call....perhaps a smacking??

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