HAHA...this was really funny!! really like it.Author's Response: Thank you so much, its so great to see that people are still reading my stuff on here! Report Review
njoyd readng ths keep it upAuthor's Response: Thank you kindly! Report Review
asdfasdfasdfsafasfasfafafsadfAuthor's Response: i agree... Report Review
I would have loved to ba a marauder. Great writing as usualAuthor's Response: Oh god me too!!! Report Review
is it about him reading lily's diary or something worse? and poor james! remus is too smart not to be careful around! remember that, "lily"!Author's Response: We will just have to see! Thanks! Report Review
love love loved it! the manly skip, sirius being hilarious, clever remus, lily not having a clue about the marauder's map. it's brilliant!Author's Response: Thanks!! Hehe, glad you are liking! Report Review
Ahh! I love this story! "thinking about how funny it would be if he just all of a sudden randomly poked them with a very long stick" - this is so something my friends and I would think.Author's Response: Hahaha I know, right? Thanks! Report Review
Aw, I absolutely love Remus. You portray him so well (:Author's Response: I just adore him, so thank you kindly! Report Review
what? tell me! remus has worked it out already? well thats gay lol did i mention i just ate a tim tam (thats aussie for chocolate biscuit)? sorry great story! 10/10Author's Response: yeah you said that. cool? Report Review
Hey! This was a great chapter! It was hilarious! I loved it! -Tanya:)Author's Response: Thanks, thanks! Report Review
Uhoh...as in diary private...or female problems private...cause WHOA that is just wrong...hehe...Sirius...on his period...LOL!Author's Response: I didn't want to step into that area...Sirius and 'that time of the month'. Some things are better left un-read, lol. Report Review
Oh-still love it. I just love how you have the Marauders wondering what's going on without being over-obvious and stuff. And I love Dumbledore's attitude towards all this. Oh-truth and dare, don't you think that could be a little dangerous considering that they'll probably use some spell so that a person can't lie (considering they're wizards, it only makes sense). That could spell trouble, and I hope it does! I actually don't think that last sentence made sense...lol. ~LBAuthor's Response: That sentence was like a wonderful little pun that you didn't mean to write. Just lovely, dear. Thanks for reading! Report Review
uh oh, i have an idea about what it could be, but i'm not saying unless it's wrong...Author's Response: lol, a wise move. Report Review
sirius is hilarious FUN AND KISSESAuthor's Response: I adore writing Sirius. Ah, good times, lol. Thanks for the review! Report Review
LOVE IT! :7)!Author's Response: Glad to hear it! Report Review
manly skip" haha niceXDAuthor's Response: Oh, manly skips are totally awesome. I've decided that. Right here and now. Thanks for reviewing, hope you like the rest! Report Review
Hehehehe...this is wonderful...parents think we're crazy, laughing at the computer screen...if they only knew!!!Author's Response: Thank you! It's always fun to get your parents to think you've completely lost your mind, isn't it? Or it that just me...? lol. Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
Once again, a great chapter!! I can't wait to see what Sirius wants to talk to Lily about! I guess i'll just continue reading. Keep up the good work.Author's Response: Thank you very much! Continue reading you shall.. Report Review
hmmmm... what could it be? DamselAuthor's Response: A lot of things. Put your mind to work. Report Review
Hahaha :D This can't be good... I -puffs out chest- AM GOING TO FINISH IT! Wow, that's like a first :) I love the story!Author's Response: Gotta love someone who puffs out their chest, lol! Thanks for reviewing! Report Review
HAHAHA I THINK I KNOW WHAT IT IS.... maybe.Author's Response: ...maybe you do, maybe you don't. Report Review
Wait, before I even read this chapter, this line struck me: "...and would always be that way for the rest of his life." Lily... James... Godric's Hollow... Ohh...Author's Response: I believe that line was referring to James and how he glows in attention, am I correct? Yes. Well, it's true, isn't it? Right up to the night at Godric's Hollow. I love him. Report Review
Oh dear! (wow I keep starting reviews with 'oh' xD) Scandulous lol! I love how you can make their dialogue seem so flowing and flawless...alot of people don't write dialogue between the Marauders very well. =) 8 out of 10 again! (lol how about I just stop saying the rating.. =D)Author's Response: Thank you! I like writing dialogue..and truth be told, I say it out loud to myself sometimes when I'm not sure if it will work or not just to see if it sounds plausible. So ya. I'm glad you liked the chapter, thanks again for reviewing! Report Review
Doesn't Sirius realise that to everyone around them, it will seem like Lily made up the new password? He's not very good at pretending to be Lily... =DAuthor's Response: Well he is Sirius. Report Review
hmmm..... *thinks* it couldn't be..... um... nevermind. good chapter!!Author's Response: Lol. Ok then. Report Review
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