146 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DobbyLover 

2nd December 2015:
The last line made me cry. Well done!

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Review #2, by ginerva_molly_weasley 

14th July 2013:
Oh this is so sad.

Poor Severus, as much as I don't like him you can't deny his love for Lily is so powerful and I think you've shown that so well here with him struggling to maintain his composure when Dumbledore tells him about the death of Lily and James. You can tell that he is heart broken and that he did truly care for her and didn't want Voldemort to get her.

There is a sense of foreboding at the beginning of the story as you set the scene with him creating something which required a lot of great care and attention causing him to be preoccupied however the creation was met with the destruction by Dumbledore of Snape's whole world and I really liked the contrast there between it and you also saw the potion going up in smoke which I really liked.

Considering what had happened Dumbledore did seem to be a little blaze and not too concerned over the death of Lily and James though but maybe that was just my perception.

The last line was just so cute though!

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Review #3, by AER 

25th September 2012:
Wow. Amazing! I can totally see Snape doing just this when he hears of Lily's death.

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Review #4, by Mimaligrl2012 

4th April 2012:
Oh wow. What a great story! It is nice to see this from his point of view. And you have superb writing skills. Wonderful job!

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Review #5, by thepottergirl 

12th January 2012:
Very nice. I loved it.

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Review #6, by girly1393 

10th September 2010:
Snape is one of my favorite characters to portray in terms of not really being a bad guy. But I've never considered the night the Potters died in Snape's mind.

It was cleverly written, tenderly spun, and so moving. It was beautiful.

Bravo to you.

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Review #7, by potter4ever 

28th February 2010:
one of d few tymes where we got 2 know d emotional snape
but i was of d opinion snape returned 2 hogwarts after lily nd james died not b4. that was a serious flaw

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Review #8, by avani 

24th February 2010:
i really liked it.i usually dont lyk lily)snape stories.but ur story was exeptional and congrts on ur award.

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Review #9, by Delanie 

18th February 2010:
Beautiful, absolutely magnificent. This is something to be proud of and I hope you are. Keep writing, you are going somewhere.

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Review #10, by carbine23 

8th February 2010:
Beautiful, Now I really think Snape is a human.

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Review #11, by Quazie89 

6th February 2010:
This story actually got me intrested in the Snape/Lily relationship. Good stuff.

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Review #12, by Timechild 

14th January 2010:
An interesting fic you have here. This is a side of Severus that few have ever tried to do. The emotion is nicely done. Severus' reaction is also quite believable.

Good job

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Review #13, by Muckers_14 

8th January 2010:
It had so much detail and was amazing. It was deep and it was written almost as if it could of been in the books.

I loved it


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Review #14, by MollyOly 

28th December 2009:
This is beautifully written, with fascinating insight into Snape's character. Thank you for sharing it!

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Review #15, by Ava 

28th December 2009:
It's awesome! relly well written.

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Review #16, by firebolt_226 

21st December 2009:
oh, this was so sad... you totally deserve the dobby award. the emotions were written very well. overally, this is an excellent one-shot.

a 9/10. (:

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Review #17, by presi 

30th November 2009:
very very nice!! touchy and shows the real Snape!


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Review #18, by A Friend 

27th November 2009:
This is a very good piece of writing, and I think you deserved that award, whatever it was called. I really enjoyed the reaction of Snape when he was told the bad news, and I think you really captured the element of conversation well, both in the way Dumbledore and Snape spoke and how they carried a tone in your writing, so you could hear their voices when you read it. It's very difficult to do this, so I applaud you!

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Review #19, by EMC 153 

25th November 2009:
It was good told you a side you would think snape didn't have i liked it.

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Review #20, by Riverwind 

24th November 2009:
I can see why this won, very good.

Thank you,

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Review #21, by The Golden Trio 

10th November 2009:
aw! so sad! poor snape!

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Review #22, by Ayriannah 

10th November 2009:
.no words.Oh.My.God.(I did just OMG.)

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Review #23, by QuietRiot 

5th November 2009:
Normally, I read chapter-stories, but this was AMAZING!! I absolutely loved it!

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Review #24, by Elvira 

1st November 2009:
Wow. It was amazing. Made me all teary-eyed.
I really love how you descripe everything. It's great

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Review #25, by Kiersten1218 

31st October 2009:
Awe, I actually sympathize with Snape. I really love this!
You are so detailed I love it!

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