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Review #1, by FriendofMolly 

29th July 2017:
Your title caught my eye. This is my favorite genre, so I read the first chapter. I like the feeling you have projected. I am intrigued so I'll save it and look forward to how this develops.
PS Please take time to reread each chapter for grammatical mistakes, titles should always be capitalized. Also the way this was spaced seemed a bit uneven, that may or may not be your doing. Keep it going.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. To tell you the truth, I'm just trying to get the story idea out first. My 9 yrs old kid is helping me fix my grammar. :)

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