2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by kayt 

24th July 2017:
This is exactly the sort of story I love to read, and there never seem to be enough well written ones around. Its so nice to see a little bit of everyone making up the family tapestry, and you've written the characters so that they feel real. I can't wait to find out how Molly and Arthur do on their travels. I really wish that I could write something that reads as easily as this.

Author's Response: Thank you. I come from a big family, so I think I've drawn on our dynamics a bit.

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Review #2, by Ohpl 

24th July 2017:
This is a wonderful story. I love how thoughtful you are about everyone. They are not just a mass of people but individuals who have grown into themselves.
I especially enjoy that it is Molly's desire to read Catherine Cookson ( and others ) that pushes her out of her comfort zone.
I have just read all 4 chapters and am looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. I'm gad you're enjoying it. I am pleased that you like the characterisations. When I started writing this, it was just going to be a romp, but I soon realised that it was the characters and relationships that are important. And Molly is Arthur's wife - there is bound to be some commonality of interests and outlook, even if she despairs of him sometimes!

Next chapter should follow soon, but the rest still needs writing.

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