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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by LilyPotterEvans1976 

25th July 2017:
That Dumbledore, never gives up does he, i'm with James, no kid of mine would go to those horrible people.

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Review #2, by Dobbyandginn 

7th July 2017:
Okay i like it so far and a twin sister sounds like a good good thing to put in. Also i personally would like longer Chapters because i feel they are just too short right now.

I understand about the Dumbledore being a git but not evil, also can you change it into Ron Bashing i never liked him until he returned in the Deathley Hallows when he saved Harry and he grew up.

But overall i like it so far and i am looking forward to future chapters.

Author's Response: Hey! Thank you so much for your review:) I am so sorry for the late reply. I agree. Dumbledore is not evil here, I just made him a little more manipulative for the sake of the plot.
I will be posting future chapters soon, but I have already posted a few more chapters on Fanfiction for this fic. I've added a twin sister, but in the most logical way I could think.

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