6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Felpata Lupin 

16th June 2017:
Hi, B, love!
It's 9am and I'm waiting for Anja and Jo to wake up so I thought I would profit and leave you this long-owed review. (And maybe get to the new chapter too, if I have time)

"Never before had he felt as though maybe he wasnít so immortal. That life was not perfect, that his familyís wealth and name couldnít fix everything." The impotence in front of death... this really hits me in the feelings so much... also, I'm a bit disappointed that Finn chose to condemn an innocent girl, but I can see why he did so and I still love him.

"Like our good looks."
"I heard that skips generations."
Ahahah! Did I mention I love Brindley?

The whole scene on the mountain, the dancing and everything that happens next... oh, my Shakespeare! That was just amazing and wonderful and... I so love Finn and Brindley together. And I so love your writing! Also, I loved the bit about the birthmarks, such a nice touch!

I loved the idea of the ring, it was so clever. And I loved that moment with Hero. I just wish she made it in time to tell him what Tom did. But I have a feeling he will figure it out soon anyway...

"The two most important girls in his life. One he had already lost. The other was only a matter of time." Poor Finn... can I just hug him?

My little Bash... I almost forgot you mentioned him... what is he up to? Should I be worried?

Sorry, I'm cutting this short. There's surely something I forgot to say. Just wanted to tell you again how much I loved this chapter! It was really, really brilliant!

Love thee, little B!

Author's Response: Chiaraaa! Thank you so much for coming back and leaving a review, even when I told you not to :P I'm so glad you liked the chapter! Thou always brings a smile to my face :) ♥

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Review #2, by PaulaTheProkaryote 

4th June 2017:
Hello again!

I finished dinner and had to come right back to be certain sweet Finn baby would not sell out Brindley. As if thatís even a question.

I'm just basking in the whole selflessness of the bit about him needing to do something special for her really is. And yeah, he is doing the right thing. Even if it's putting someone else in harm's way. Such as his own tail.

This precious little outing is the best non-date date I've ever read too. I'm so in love with the two of them it's not even funny. I'M NOT CRYING YOU ARE. Itís so tempting for me to just stop here and pretend they live happily ever after dancing on top of a mountain by themselves. No death, no Tom, no Gellert.


Also can we just talk about what a rune nerd he is. AND SOULMATE BIRTHMARKS.

Thank you for the always because thatís the way always should be.


Part of me thinks he didnít really trust Tom to begin with, but Iím glad Hero could come back and reinforce the notion in his mind. And that she didnít tell him pointedly that he had been behind her death. I donít think Finn would have thought before acting.

ďBecause I think it will go with my outfit.Ē Heís my favorite character of all time.


Author's Response: PAULA! Thank you! :')

"Rune nerd" oh my goodness that's cute. Everytime I get a new review from you it's the best day of the week, and you gave me TWO! Thank you, my love ♥ ♥ ♥

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Review #3, by princesslily_36 

1st June 2017:
Hello B!

Thank you for the review swap! But in all fairness I should have reviewed this last week when I read it. There's so much to say!

I love how Finn and Brindey's relationship is progressing!!! And it's heartbreaking, the way Finn feels so helpless. I guess Brindley is too proud to accept his money, and I can't imagine how it is for him to know how it's going to end and still be with her. *Sob* you're breaking my heart B!

Finn is such a Slytherin, with his moral dilemma and rationalizing it with his urge to protect the one he loves, Your characterization is so amazing omejahvfwbwwe! (That was a squee btw :P)

Ooohhh the mountain scene! I remember us discussing about it in your planning stages. That grand gesture *sigh*! The image of Brindley teaching him swing kinda cracked me up. I'm just imaging Finn all awkward holding his hands ridiculously stiff and stumbling over her feet!! Haha!

I just got caught up in all the romance once again *heart-eyes* I love how he was afraid to harm her, how he was gentle, and how he didn't leave in the morning... it shows how far he had come, and how she had changed him!!

OMGWEIANRBAHAOLN! Finn found out how the resurrection stone works! I did NOT expect that! Oh Hello, Hero! Nice of you to drop by, haha! But the plot thickens now... and I see little Bash. What's he working on?

I can't believe Finn was that cool about the ring though. I mean he admitted to Tom, and Tom didn't flinch?? Did Tom know it was a hallow and didn't care? Did he really give the ring away? Wasn't it a horcrux? Wait had he made the ring a horcrux already? OMG, Tom is as creepy as ever! And you write him so well.

One of the best things about this story is that you have everything - mystery, plot, romance... I can't wait to find out what happens next.

This is one of the most enjoyable review swaps I've had!! I can't wait for the next chapter!

Loads of love, snowball hugs an penguin kisses!

Author's Response: No matter - you're here now!

Thank you, Ysh! Your reviews are always so amazing and I love hearing your thoughts ♥ ♥ ♥

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Review #4, by quill2parchment 

25th May 2017:
Romantic, grown up, thoughtful Finn is everything I need in life!

Okay and that mountain top scene made the hopeless romantic in me extremely happy. It was so sweet of him to take her there, and I love how he's always so careful with her, but Brindley is definitely strong too! And they're just both beyond adorable. I'm so glad that they both go to feel like they were the only two people in the world and be normal teenagers in love for one night.

"A new spell heíd learned, a joke she would have liked, how good Sebastian was getting on his flute. Brindley. But now that his chance was here, he couldnít think of any of them."

I miss Hero :( That reunion broke my heart. But of course, she is quick to warn him about Tom! And I'm so glad that Finn is starting to realize just how dangerous Tom is!

I can't wait to see what happens next! Every time I see on update on this story, my heart skips a beat, B. I'm so obsessed with it!

Author's Response: Quilly, your reviews bring me so much joy. I adore hearing from you and thank you so much for all the amazing things you have to say! ♥ ♥

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Review #5, by dreamgazer220 

24th May 2017:

Okay so I'm a little annoyed that Finn sold out some poor innocent girl in order to keep Brindley safe, but I could see how - in his twisted mind - it was the right thing to do. It's quite Slytherin of him, really. I'm also curious because it seems as though he's okay even after being tortured, but I have a feeling that's where his mind has been.

FINN AND BRINDLEY ON THE MOUNTAIN. I REPEAT, FINN AND BRINDLEY ON THE MOUNTAIN! Okay, it doesn't totally make up for the last chapter but it's really freaking adorable and I'm going to pretend that it does because they're wonderful and amazing and #otp. I'm glad that she wasn't hesitant about wanting to be with him, that it was clearly something she wanted.

ALSO, loved this line: "I am not going to break, Finn." I love how precious and concerned he is for her and she's just like, "lol, boy, PLEASE."

Hero hath made an appearance! I was excited about this scene and curious how you were going to do it. Interesting choice that her grave is next to Myrtle's - was that done on purpose? LOOK AT THEM GETTING ALONG AND FINN TALKING TO GHOSTS.

That's right, Finn, don't trust Tom. He's a psychopath. A pretty one, I know you don't care about that, but he's a psychopath.

I'm so anxious to see how he's going to react when he finds out the truth about Hero's death.

Another fantastic chapter, my love!
♥♥♥ J

Author's Response: You thinking of Brindley like "lol, boy, PLEASE" had me cracking up more than you know.

Hero's and Myrtle's stones are in a little memorial garden - you'll find they probably aren't the only ones in there. One of my primary schools had one and that's where I got the idea.

Thank you for reviewing, my love!!! ♥

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Review #6, by marauderfan 

24th May 2017:

I am already hyperventilating at seeing the title to this chapter. And the quote that starts it off. You're really worrying me here.

And the first paragraph too about the song of the death of someone's lover. You are not being subtle with these hints AND I AM VERY WORRIED ABOUT THESE TWO LOVEBIRDS. don't kill off these precious cinnamon rolls please

That he had condemned an innocent girl to danger to save someone else. -- WAIT, HE DID THAT? FINN I AM SO MAD AT YOU

He was doing the right thing. -- NO HE IS NOT. FINN. YOU DID A BAD THING

I am still annoyed at Finn but golly gee those two are adorable dancing on the mountain. Please let them just stay up there forever where you can't harm them anymore.

The resurrection stone! AHHH IT'S HERO! WOW PLOT TWIST. I didn't anticipate that at all. This scene is kind of heartbreaking because she's there, but not there. That can't be easy for Finn, especially as it's just more of a reminder that she's not there. And she tried to warn him! D: I'm just glad she was able to say as much as she did before she was interrupted.

Also Tom is going to be so paranoid when he realizes that his jacket is missing and with it one of his Horcruxes...

ďBecause I think it will go with my outfit.Ē -- omg Finn XD

And once again you end a chapter in the most ominous way. Aah! I'm dying to know. Pardon the morbid humour because at this point in the story I'm worried about everyone and have suspicions they're going to die. This story is so good aksdflksjdf. great chapter!

P.S. Why couldn't the bicycle stand up?
Because it was two tired

Author's Response: KRISTIN! You are first and amazing and I love you.

Why do you think I'll kill all the cinnamon rolls? Does that sound like something I would do? ;)

Oh, stop it, you.

Thank you so much for the review! :D x

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