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Review #1, by marauderfan 

25th June 2017:
Snape trying to ask Hermione to dance was the best thing I've read this week. *wipes away laugh tears* I know I shouldn't be laughing, but omg. They are both so awkward and I love it. :D

And the story of why Severus is so good at dancing kind of broke my heart a little. I fully admit I'm not Snape's biggest fan, but the thought of little Severus and his mother enjoying rare moments of calm and happiness as she teaches him to dance, that hits me in the feels. Aw.

The last scene was explosive! I really didn't expect Hermione to lash out at Lily like that. I can get where Lily is coming from, after all, she was hurt pretty badly and it's natural that she would assume that Snape did something similar to Hermione. But from Hermione's pov, it makes sense that she would be annoyed that Lily keeps projecting all her own emotional baggage onto what's going on with Hermione. Hermione's right, it is a different circumstance, but... I dunno, if I were Lily, I'd be wary too.

One thing that's super interesting about this fic is that the characters you normally see as the protagonists and shown in kind of a flattering way in most fics, are the villains here, for lack of better term. (Not you know, Evil Scheming Villain With Stereotypical Mustache, but the kinds of characters who are always at odds with the protagonist). James, Sirius, and particularly Lily tend to be glorified in Marauder fics and the change in perspective here is really refreshing. They are people, not angels.

Another great chapter. Also I predict drama in the next one since Hermione ran away from her feelings and Severus probably is going to be closed off about it now. :P

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Review #2, by fantastichufflepuff 

31st March 2017:
Yesss two different chapters thank you!! Love it

Author's Response: You're more than welcome! Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ♥

xoxo Meg

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Review #3, by LittleMissAutumn 

30th March 2017:
Oo burn, Hermione. She really told Evans. I think it's annoying how often her friends tease her about her relationship with Snape. They're so cute together! The marauders are real jerks and need to simmer down. As always though, your characterization is perfect and proves that Hermione, if anything, will always remain loyal to those that she cares about. Update soon please!!!

Author's Response: Hahaha! Burn indeed :p Everyone has said their piece, so they should back off a little now. Hopefully. ;) James and Remus aren't *too* bad. But yeah, Sirius is pretty obnoxious haha.

You're super sweet! Thank you so much! I'm so happy you're still enjoying the story, and I hope that you continue to as it goes on. ♥

xoxo Meg

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