8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by marauderfan 

25th June 2017:

I'm sorry I am the absolute worst and haven't kept up with this story for ages. I haven't had electricity since February. And you've been a writing powerhouse in the meantime and have written seven new chapters! So, now is when I try to catch up. Also, since last time I read this, the story has picked up so many awards there's not even room for more awards on the banner which is mega impressive so CONGRATS for writing such a wonderful and highly awarded story! Ok, seven chapters, here we go!

OMG the beginning of this chapter is great. At first I was kind of surprised the kiss was happening already and that both of them have already come to terms with their feelings with one another, but turns out it's just Hermione, and it wasn't even real! That must have been kind of a rude awakening to find out she's actually just dreaming! And to find that Amelia had taken her blankets off her. Brrr.

When she first realized she fancied Ron, the most she had to worry about was whether or not he fancied her back, but with Severus, she worried she could potentially ruin the very fabric of time. -- I hate it when that happens in a relationship. XD But seriously though what a difficult thing to contend with.

Aw. The way Hermione calms Severus down and gets him out of his angry sulky mood that arises when James and Sirius taunt him, it's great that she's able to get him to not dwell on it.

Dogweed and Deathcap is a perfect name for a potion shop. Is that canon or did you come up with it? I don't remember it in the books but it feels like it would fit right in.

Oh nooo. Nothing like entitled Death Eaters taking up your time while you're on a date and 100% ruining the mood.

. It's an absolute delight seeing him with a proper witch for a change, Lucius sneered. -- Joke's on you, Lucius.

The end of this chapter is really sweet. Hermione is falling fast, and I like how gradual and believable you've made the process of Severus opening up to her and showing emotions other than his typical mask. I do wonder more and more though, Dumbledore was never clear about when Hermione was to come back to the 90s (or how?) so she doesn't even know how long she's around in the 70s, and how long this will go on. What happens if Severus falls for her and then she disappears? I mean, surely that can't be good for his self esteem either. But at least he will have known that someone cared about him. Ah, I dont know. I'm just really curious how things will play out!

Great chapter!

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Review #2, by Harry's #1 Fan 

24th March 2017:
What an amazing fic! I hope you update it soon. That's some cliff-hanger! This seems like it will be a very captivating story, and it's so incredible that you thought of letting us peek into the past. It does seem a bit inconsistent with the books, though, since she falls OUT of love with Ron, but will you make her fall in love with him?

Author's Response: Aww wow thank you so much! I'm so thrilled that you're enjoying it so far! ♥

Yeah this will deviate from cannon just a bit. Snape/Hermione is one of my favorite ships in fanfic, so this will very much be a Snamione story, sadly she will not be with Ron. I hope that doesn't deter you from reading the rest of the story, however. :)

Thank you so so much for reading and taking the time to review! If you do continue on, I hope you enjoy the future chapters!! 16 should be up within a few weeks! : D

xoxo Meg

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Review #3, by TLB 

23rd March 2017:
New Reader!!

OMG! Absolutely in love with this fic! 😍
You're an incredible author! You certainly cause the reader to view Snape in a completely different light!
Eagerly awaiting Chapter 16! ❤

Author's Response: Hi New Reader!! *waves*

Aww you're incredibly sweet! Thank you so much!! I'm thrilled that you've stumbled across my story and that you're enjoying it :D I'm writing chapter 16 as we speak, so I'm hoping to have that up within the next few weeks. :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! I hope you continue to enjoy the story as it goes on ♥

xoxo Meg

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Review #4, by Emcnary 

22nd March 2017:
Hooray! I'm so glad to see another chapter posted:). You are a cruel, cruel author to make that kiss a dream! *sighs* I'll just have to keep waiting for the real thing...

Author's Response: Eep! *hides* Sorry about that! :p Hope you're not *too* angry with me haha. It's coming eventually, I promise! :D

Thank you so, so much for reading and for the reviews!! I truly appreciate each and every one of them ♥

xoxo Meg

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Review #5, by BBHP 

22nd March 2017:
Dying to read the rest of this! Keep it coming! You're an excellent writer. I love the idea of Hermione saving Snape.

Author's Response: Thank you so much!! ♥ In the process of writing the next chapter now, so I'm hoping to have that up soon!

Thanks for reading and reviewing!! I'm glad you're enjoying it and I hope you continue to as I update!! :)

xoxo Meg

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Review #6, by Nicole 

21st March 2017:
OMG, please write more soon! I didnt even see that your story wasnt finished yet. With our daughter and all I mostly read completed stuff, but yours is so good, Im crying here. I cant wait!!!

Author's Response: Oh I'm so glad you stumbled across my story! It's only about halfway finished as of right now, but I am writing and updating when I can. Chapter 16 is already started, so I'm hopeful that will be up by the beginning of April, by the time I write it and edit. :)

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! ♥ I hope you continue to enjoy it as I update! :)

xoxo Meg

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Review #7, by casey 

21st March 2017:
I loved every thing you have written. I honestly believe that Severus and Hermione are meant for each other. please continue your story it is really good I could not stop reading it.

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!! Snamione is such a guilty pleasure of mine, so I'm super happy that you feel that way! ♥ I'm definitely continuing it, so no worries there. :) Chapter 16 is already started, so I'm hoping to have that up sometime in early April.

Thank you so might for reading and reviewing!!

xoxo Meg

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Review #8, by Huffle 

19th March 2017:
Finally! As creepy as it sounds I have been stalking your story for an update and it finally happened haha I think I cried mentally. Thank you so much for updating

Author's Response: Hahaha not creepy at all! Trust me, I have fics I stalk, too. ;) I'm super flattered honestly. ♥

Thank you so much for reading and reviewing (and stalking)!! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it!

xoxo Meg

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