4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by leannadrobis 

25th February 2017:
Haha it's realyl fun so far!

Author's Response: It's a lot of fun to write, tbh, so I'm glad you like it! :) Thanks for the review! ;)

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Review #2, by quill2parchment 

29th January 2017:
It was a great first chapter! I enjoyed their interaction! Their banter was witty but believable for their age. You did a really good of introducing the characters through their actions which is hard to do.

Can't wait to catch up with the rest of the chapters!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I have to say, the banter's a ton of fun to write, and I'm glad that you liked reading it. I hope you like the rest of the story! :)

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Review #3, by Guest 

7th January 2017:
Good start! I totally ship them, but that's just me. ;) I loved the banter, and this seems like a really good start! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Haha the banter is a lot of fun to write, so I'm glad you like it. :) I'll sort of see where I can go ship-wise, but they're only in fifth year, so there's only so much I can do, haha, since the story won't be that long. Thanks for the review! :)

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Review #4, by hamiltonofhogwarts 

7th January 2017:
I love the way that you characterized James in this story, and your OC was written extremely well. Based on the first chapter, Charlie is funny, impulsive, undoubtably strong, and a little too Gryffindor for her own good. In other words, any story told from the perspective of a character like her is bound to be as unique as she is, and you've done a great job writing it. The relationships between the characters we know and your OCs is great, and all of the roommates seem to be really promising characters. They're all very believable in their interactions, and I love the way that everything played out in this first chapter. Overall, great job, and I'm quite excited to see where the story goes.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :) I've been doing my best to make memorable characters without making them too over-the-top, so it's nice to hear that someone likes them. I hope you like what's to come! :)

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