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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap 

8th April 2017:
Attack!

I feel strange coming in during the middle of the story but Severus and Hermione, intriguing! Iíve never read a story about them before.

ďI suppose so...but I don't care what people think. Severus and I know where we stand,Ē Hermione said firmly.

Hermione, puh-lease. Stop being so naÔve. You might think you know where you stand but Severus, I highly doubt it. Itís a date. Itís always a date when the other person doesnít think it is.

Hermione noticed a touch of red tint Remusí cheeks as he nodded and quietly said hello.

Aw. I have such a soft spot for Remus. He likes Hermione. I can get on the bandwagon real quick over here. I obviously havenít seen Hermione and Severus interact but Remus makes my heart sing.

Blushing!

How Remus.

Yes it was true that she and Severus spent quite a bit of time together, but so did Remus, James, Sirius and Peter. And that didnít mean that they were all dating.

Thatís a valid point and no one ever thought Hermione was with Ron. Maybe Harry but that was only because of Skeeter.

Hermione loved when Severus genuinely laughed, as they did together then. It was wonderful to see him appear so human and normal.

Oh! It seems I have a soft spot for Severus too. I am complete mush right now. Hermione, you think heís adorable. Come on girl. Youíre an item.

She indeed had fallen for Severus Snape.

A million times yes! Itís so wrong but so right. God, you could see why Lily liked him. Severus is quite the catch.

What a predicament. So sheís there to save him, obviously but I donít know messing with such a big chunk of the past doesnít bode well for the future. Severus himself isnít internally bad. Heís just misunderstood. I think even though he cares for Hermione (and I get this is an AU story) he would still make the same mistake twice. Itís just in his nature.

I need to read this story once CTF is over. Iím so hooked in!

Author's Response: Deds!!!

A. I'm so super stoked to see you around again! *squishsquishsquish*
B. Gah! You're the sweetest!! ♥

I know, it's kinda weird when you have to review a mid chapter when you haven't read the earlier chapters. I kinda don't want to say *too* much, in case you do come back to read it. I don't want to really spoil anything on you.

But one thing I'll say is that it isn't Hermione that Remus is crushing on. :) He and Amelia have a little thing going, which I love writing, even though it's not the main ship in the story.

I always felt like Severus had to be kind of sweet (in his way), and much different when he was younger, because I can't see Lily being so close to him if he wasn't. So I'm glad that he's coming off that way. :)

*locks lips* Can't. Say. Much. Without. Spoiling. :p

But Deeds! Thanks so much for this review!! I hope that you do come back at some point, and if you do, I hope you enjoy the story!! ♥

xoxo Meg


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Review #2, by K 

15th March 2017:
YOU CANT END IT LIKE THIS

Author's Response: I'm not, promise! :) I'm nearly finished with the next chapter, so that should be up soon!! Thanks so much for reading and taking the time to review!!

xoxo Meg


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Review #3, by jacepotter7 

22nd February 2017:
I LOVE this story and am totally hooked! Please continue writing :)

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying it!! Next chapter is almost finished, so it should be up soon!! Thanks for reading and taking the time to review!

xoxo Meg


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Review #4, by Bere 

21st February 2017:
Love it!!! I couldnt stop reading it
And here it is the end of the chapter (TT^TT)
Can't wait for an upload!!!
Thank you so much for gracing us with your awesome imagination: D!

Author's Response: Aww thank you so much!! I'm really happy to hear that you're enjoying it so far. :) I'm nearly finished with the next chapter, so that should be up soon! Thank you for reading and taking the time to review!!

xoxo Meg


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Review #5, by Sushmita 

1st February 2017:
This story has been absolutely amazing. I love seeing the conflicted Hermione and this amazing different side to Severus. Please continue this story and don't stop.

Author's Response: Aww you're so sweet!! Like I said before, this story is my baby, so I definitely will be continuing on with it. I'm writing the following chapter right now, so I'm hoping to have it up within the next 2 weeks or so.

Thank you again for the amazing reviews!!

xoxo Meg


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Review #6, by marauderfan 

15th January 2017:
Ah, the gossip. There was really no way around it. Poor Remus- I do feel bad for him, after all what happened between Lily and Severus really hurt Lily, and so Remus cares about Hermione and wants to save her from the same fate happening to her, but yeah - she's the one who considers that maybe it's changed Severus too and he learned from his past. Besides, I always love it when Hermione stands up for herself. The scene in PoA where she punches Malfoy will always be one of my favorite things XD

She was definitely thinking of them as two different people, and that could potentially become quite dangerous for her. -- Yes! This is exactly how I see it too, like she knows they're the same person, but based on the interactions she's had with each of them they're entirely different people in her mind. And I like that she knows it's dangerous for her to have that dichotomy in her mind. Hermione is smart, and introspective, and I love that she has these conflicting thoughts in her mind that she is aware are conflicting but she can't work out whether to listen to her head or her heart. That's the best thing about your Hermione - although in a vastly different situation than the Hermione from the books, her character is easily recognizable as the same person because you write her so well.

The rain put a damper... ahahaha. Ba-dum chhh. *CYMBALS CRASH* that was a winner of a pun, Hermione

Yes, friends who find the sound of each other's voices adorable. Friends.

Hahaha, the kid in the portrait who thought Hermione was admonishing him for stealing sweets when really she was just talking to herself! *dies* XD

Hermione so would be the type to go for Truth in truth or dare.

Ahh she's actually realized it! (Poor Ron, who's stuck back in 1998 probably pining over Hermione when she's gone back and fallen for Snape instead. But I don't actually feel too bad for Ron because he's not really in this story so out of sight out of mind? haha)

And then at the end we have Hermione going and getting lost in a million thoughts, thinking about every single possibility of what could happen, and this is such a huge part of the reason I like this story - your Hermione is so realistic. And so is your Severus, how I would imagine him being as a teenager. And it's actually not hard to understand how two people like this might fall for one another.

Seeing the gossip angle amidst the crowd Hermione knows s interesting, but I'm curious about the rumors circulating amongst Severus' Death Eater buddies - I'm sure they can't have anything too positive to say about her, although it's true in this timeline she's supposedly not a Muggle-born, so who knows.

Great chapter! ♥

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Review #7, by Emcnary 

30th December 2016:
Oh, the conflict:). I honestly think Hermione and Severus are so perfect for each other! I just hope she treads lightly with his feelings after he lost Lily as a friend. Speaking of Lily, I'm curious to see if she fits into the story more. I'm in love with this story, please keep the chapters coming!

Author's Response: Aren't they though?? I love them haha. Hopefully she does, because Sev is at a very fragile stage in his life right now. Lily will definitely show up again soon(ish). Not as a main character, but we'll see her again.

Thank you so much for reading! I'm thrilled that you're enjoying it so far, and I hope you continue to as it goes on. And thank you for the reviews!! I truly appreciate the kind words! ♥

xoxo Meg


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