6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Shinicha 

29th December 2016:
Ah they're so close! It really is amazing how your story manages to draw me in completely even with months of waiting in-between. My heart is beating like crazy and I'm really edgy... how do you do it??! Now, will they find out who did it, or eill something else horrible happen? Should they've obliviated Lawrence after all? Oh I can't wait to read the next chapter! Good job

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Review #2, by isaac 

20th December 2016:
I started reading this story because it had a special cover and my favorite story on this site also has a special cover. it immediately had one strike against me continuing to read it since I don't usually read next generation based stories since I'm most interested in the Golden Trio's generation and stories. Then the story received a second strike because I disagreed with how you wrote Hermione and Ginny. Yet I kept on reading and that's because you are telling a really good story and the fact I disagree with your portrayal of minor characters in your story does not change that. I love how you had Selenia freak out when she saw Harry after her and Rose went lingerie shopping, how you wrote Selenia well enough that I felt something when you killed her. I love how you have the balls to kill major characters like Selenia in a surprising manner because as much as I liked her, it helped prevent the story from getting the Bruce Willis effect. (When you read a story or watch a movie and know that the main characters will all remain unharmed regardless of how dire the situation like Bruce Willis in many movies). I also liked how you wrote Harry and Ron and both strong competent wizards. I cannot stand stories that make Ron out to be a bumbling idiot because he clearly isn't. I was glad you made Harry learn from his parents mistake and not try to trick anyone with who the secret keeper is. I always thought not making your strongest trusted wizard the secret keeper was a stupid mistake. Even if the weaker wizard doesn't betray you, it makes it easier for the bad guy to just murder your secret keeper and that decreases the point of protecting yourself if you need to sacrifice your friend to do so.
Really good story. Thanks for writing this.


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Review #3, by Hagrid1987 

7th December 2016:
Loved it. I love seeing all the Aurors in action and that there's hope for Albus. I can't wait to see how James matures, as well.

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Review #4, by HPFantasticks 

1st December 2016:
I am so glad that you are back!! I love your story, it has everything! Great plot and great characters!!

My money is on James┤girlfriend, I do not remember her name now, being the one:D

Please, do update and keep on writing, you have a gift!!

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Review #5, by AbraxanUnicorn 

1st December 2016:
Yay, an update!
For a while, I was suspicious of James' girlfriend having a hand in the whole affair at Grimmauld Place, but I wonder whether it's someone else. Hmm. Might have a re-read and refresh my memory..
Great chapter, by the way :) X

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Review #6, by BabyHuey1502 

30th November 2016:
I've been looking forward to seeing you take up this story again, and I'm not disappointed. You have a real feel for your characters. I'll be looking forward to more.

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