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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by marauderfan 

5th January 2017:
I love the quotes you start each chapter with. Here I'm wondering who the innocent one is that's alluded to with that quote, and I dread to think it's Brindley. Only time will tell.

I had forgotten that Finn's owl's name is Adonis and it made me laugh all over again.

Ooh, things just got interesting regarding Sebastian..

Yikes, what a time to Floo in. Poor Jameson :( I wonder if this is a turning point for Finn though. This whole story so far (and in Hero as well) Finn has been a bystander, sometimes feeling like he should do something but he never does, and this was one such example that must have hit pretty close to home. I wonder if this is what changes him - he does seem to have a lot of determination to set things aright, although whether he puts words to action is another thing.

I know this isn't really important but really, what is Fletcher writing? hahaha

Wow, back when the Hog's Head was new and people actually went there aside from Mundungus Fletcher.

That's quite a show from Tom about what happens when they disobey him. He's such an abusive friend. Also, I wonder if he found out something about Radbourne that he can blackmail him with or if Radbourne owes him for something, because Radbourne seems a lot less keen to stand up to Tom as he was in the previous chapter. Also - is this the source of the collapsed tunnel marked on the Marauder's Map? You're a genius Bianca ;)

ASDLKJFALKSJDFLK the scene in the hospital wing is simultaneously so sweet and heartbreaking. They're bonding because of their grief and they're putting their antagonism towards each other aside for a moment and it's beautiful, even if the reason for it is sad.

Poor little Hufflepuff kid :(

As for the last bit, all I have to say is this: THERE WAS FLIRTING

Author's Response: Thank you! I love a little ominous vibe ;)

Fletcher is writing the next best seller. Obviously. And yeah, that's the collapsed tunnel!

Thanks K! ♥


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Review #2, by princesslily_36 

19th October 2016:
Because I just caught up with this. Because this is so amazing I read it all n one go. Because Finn. Because Brindley. Because B, you are AMAZING!!! And most of all, because I miss you!

I love the details, the collapsed tunnel, the little revelation about Sebastian and the way you're stringing it all together!

Love you loads!
Ysh!

Author's Response: Ysh! Best surprise ever! THANK YOU I LOVE YOU! ♥

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Review #3, by PaulaTheProkaryote 

15th October 2016:
HELLO LOVELY.

So I took my time coming here even though HOT DOG I wanted to read and review the moment you said it was up because I've been in a medicine fog and I left Dan the most nonsensical review during said fog. Literally it's half gibberish.

A summary of this review will be mostly: MY HEART OH MY HEART IM SO HAPPY WE ARE FALLING IN LOVE.

IT WAS AN ACCIDENT, GRINDELWALD OMG POOR FINN AND JAMESON. Well, Jameson gets what he gets, but poor Finn! That's certainly all the motivation he needed though.

Tom is way more Tom in this chapter. He's developed from moderately evil to someone go back in time and kill him as a baby evil. His reaction when his friends disobeyed him was over the top in the best way. It really demonstrated that he didn't view them as peers at all, but rather pawns to be used and abused. And then the poor Hufflepuff baby! Also the Hufflepuff baby really highlighted Finn's growth and change. At the beginning of Hero he'd have gladly joined in harrassing, even if he didn't really want to cause too much harm. Now he's rushing to the defense of some baby puff. WHOA.

On the note of Finn, I feel like a lot of these changes are both Brindley induced but also Hero induced. He's becoming someone she would have been proud of. (SOBS FOR MY DEAD BB)

WE WERE SO CLOSE TO FINDING OUT ABOUT BEN'S MUGGLE. You torture us on purpose.

Based on Ben and Radbourne's response to Tom's demands I wonder if they are seeing more evil Tom than Finn is.

Now for my squee: THE HOSPITAL SCENE AND THE CLOSET SCENE AND MY HEART OMG LET'S DO THIS I'M SO IN LOVE THEY ARE MY PRECIOUS BABIES. DO THEY EVEN KNOW HOW CUTE THEY ARE?

Author's Response: Anyone who says HOT DOG in a review is my favourite person.

Thank you so much, Paula! ♥


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Review #4, by Felpata Lupin 

15th October 2016:
Oh my Shakespeare, B!
What did you do to my poor heart here?

I don't even know what was sadder... Jameson's torture, Radbourne's "betrayal", Brindley in the hospital wing or that poor Hufflepuff boy... and now I'm also worried sick for my little Bash... can he really be the illegitimate Potter? He was among my suspicions, too, but it doesn't convince me... still, there's something strange about his adoption... guess I'll find out later...

But really, you break my heart repeatedly with this chapter. I only wanted to hug Finn tight the whole time. And that moment when he sort of opens up with Brindley about Hero... I actually almost cried...

And Tom... he's always more perfidious... Finn, I'll beg you once more... you've seen what kind of person he is, what he's capable of... please, stay away from him!

Side note. I really liked Fletcher. He seems so cute. And is he a writer? Sebastian, forgive me, you have a new competitor... :P

And I loved the closing! Brindley is wonderful! I so love the dynamics between the two of them! And now I'm curious about that journal... stop adding new questions instead of giving answers, B! This is getting annoying! (Kidding, I adore you and your writing too much...)

I'll stop with all the rambling now!
See you!
Chiara

Author's Response: Thanks so much little Chi! ♥

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Review #5, by dreamgazer220 

11th October 2016:
BIANCA I'M SO HAPPY YOU UPDATED, I MISSED THIS STORY! ♥

Whoa. Whoa. Okay, so I knew it was going to be intense when I read the description, and it was! Poor Finn! :( Having to listen to his father's screams like that. It's so chilling, especially when you think about how everyone else is enjoying the first Quidditch game of the season when the real rivalry is going on not too far from there. I also love how you manage to convince me that yes, this is exactly how it happened! I just want to snuggle Finn though, is that okay? He has so much going on and he seems so stressed, poor baby.

AND SEBASTAIN! IS ADOPTED! WHAT! I know we knew this, but it's weird (and I'm sure it's weird for Finn) to see the certification, the proof. Ugh. There are SO MANY GOOD THINGS IN THIS CHAPTER, B.

Again, boys being boys. A+. I love that Finn still makes time for his friends and that they hang out like normal teenagers. Drinking and having fun. It was a nice balance and breath of fresh air within this chapter that had so much darkness.

TOM. TOM, YOU'RE TURNING INTO RIDDLE NOW AND I DON'T LIKE YOU ANYMORE, UGH. I'm glad Finn's starting to feel uncomfortable around him though (like lol with the snake. Oh Tom) and that he so clearly doesn't agree with what he's doing but doesn't know how to step out of it. It's really showing Finn's character development.

AND SO MUCH FINNDLEY GOODNESS IN THIS CHAPTER! Broom closets and him telling her about Hero (WHY BIANCA WHY) :( I'm glad they're sort of mellowing out around each other, and Finn was so nervous it was her! IS THAT FORESHADOWING BIANCA? *glare*

FINNDLEY DEVELOPMENT. FINN DEVELOPMENT. SUPER DARK GRINDELWALD STUFF. Also your flawless writing.

What's not to love about this chapter?!

♥♥♥

Author's Response: Ahh this is so amazing, you made me smile all day long! THANK YOU!!!

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