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Review #1, by Rumpelstiltskin 

21st September 2017:
Hey, I'm back for the second piece!

I love the feeling of kinship during Molly's interaction with Misty -- Molly's so kind to the house elf, and I find it extremely sweet. Misty also seems to be exceptionally fond of Molly, which is equally as sweet.

Of course, I love how it ties into the last piece with Christopher popping down to the kitchens just as Molly's there.

Molly's broom is clearly important to her, and reasonably so, given her aspirations. When she tumbled to the ground during her failed trick, the first question she asked regarded the wellbeing of her broom (I forgot to mention this is my last review) and now, she's clearly disturbed by the idea of her broom being gnawed on.

I also find it hilarious that Christopher is messing with Flint by 'spiking' his sundae. What I love more is Molly taking a HUGE scoop of the whipped cream as they were trying to escape McGonagall! Luckily, it was only in the ice cream.

Aw, they kissed! That's so sweet! (And all she had been looking for were some blueberry muffins, I love that line).

Another great job with the stand-alone story, and it tied in with the previous chapter well!

Looking forward to the piece!

-Rumpel

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