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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Glisten  

9th August 2017:
Hmm... yes, honest thoughts...

IM LOVING THIS SO FAR! The guest room sounds absolutely lovely with the cute little bench and window! If I had something like that I'd probably just sit there all day reading and writing.

The tunnel vision, for some reason, really helped to convey her feeling of anxiety. I've felt anxiety of course and Ive never really had a way to describe it but "tunnel vision" is certainly a great way to do so. Tunnel vision, I think, isn't just an image, but also a feeling.

The thought of Malfoy wearing jeans and a leather jacket totally weirds me out but it's great all the same. I feel like if he were a muggle that's what his style would be. Even so, it's so strange to think about. Then again, the thought of Draco Malfoy in any sort of muggle place is odd too, but that's not impossible now is it?

So Draco doesn't completely disapprove of the place! I smiled when it said he used to think that muggle people live in mud shacks. He doesn't get out that much does he?

Your chapters are short but I'm really liking them so far! Nice work!

Author's Response: Thank you! The chapters are short but there is more to come!

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Review #2, by Siriusly21 

18th March 2016:
I really love this idea! I liked everyone's reactions, they felt realistic to me, and Draco's attitude seems very much like him. I wish the chapters were a little bit longer. Those two chapters were a great inrtoduction, but I wasn't really able to get into the story! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: Thank you much! I'm in between 2 stories at the 'mo so the lengths are going to be too long just yet.

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