5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by marauderfan 

20th February 2016:
*tries to click next chapter* *but there isn't a next chapter* Well, I guess it's time I left you a proper review then, rather than the random short reactions I've commented on various chapters.

James punched Barry to defend Abigail's honor?! Oy vey, chivalry. *shakes head* Well, I don't approve of punching, but part of me would be very glad if Abigail punched Barry herself. I want her to defend her own honor. :P But she's changed throughout the story, and it seems maybe she's getting there. Keeping my eyes peeled for "The One Where Abigail Is A Boss And Has A Backbone". You can do it Abigail!

Aw, poor William. His dad really has been the worst father, but I hope someday William actually reads the letters from him rather than tearing and burning them immediately - maybe he has something to say that's worth reading. But at the same time I can understand how, in William's perspective, no news is better than bad news, so he makes sure that he has no news rather than reading that he's a disappointment. Gah, that's so sad. :(

Also, I wasn't around much during the Dobby awards this year so this is very late but congrats on winning a Dobby for this story!

Author's Response: I have loved your reviews! :D

He did, I wished that it was Abigail that had done it herself, but she's not there yet... one day she will snap though

Yes! Totally going to be a chapter title now!

He really is the worst, but any letter that he sends William isn't going to be a good one :( William is much better off not reading any of them, he'll end up going back to how he was years ago :(

Thank you so much! :D

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Review #2, by thehiddenface 

8th February 2016:
Great chapter! I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thank you! More is coming! :D

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Review #3, by Crescent Moon  

8th February 2016:
Loved this chapter!
I'm so glad James finally punched Barry, someone's been needing to do that for a long time. If only Neville hadn't turned up and he'd managed to get Elijah too...
The part with William is just so heartbreaking. You just wanted to give him a hug. Which is rather hard to do with fictional characters through your computer screen I've recently found out...
I really can't wait to read what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you!
Someone had to punch him! He's been asking for it since the beginning! Oh yes, maybe that can happen in the sequel? Just both of them being beaten up? I would get William to help.
Oh, William! *husg him so tightly* you can hug him :P
Thank you for reading and reviewing.

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Review #4, by Regan 

7th February 2016:
Ah! Finishing in three days!! Who! Super sweet chapter but how are you going to end? Since they're just in sixth year and you've (mostly?) wrapped up all the conflicts, what's left? So pumped for chapter 40!

Author's Response: Yep! I can't believe that it'll all be over soon :( But! The sequel will be soon! Wooo!

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Review #5, by Dhruvi 

7th February 2016:
that was so cute. and i hate those two guys. i really want to know about james liking her for a couple of years because she made it seem like he didn't even know her at the start.

Author's Response: Awww thanks. I hate them too! Oh, I am in the middle of writing a one shot about his crush on Abigail, so I can put that up once I'm finished. :D She just didn't realise he knew her back then.

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