6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by lhod23 

16th November 2015:
I read this whole story in two days and I love it so much!!! Cannot wait for the next update :)

Author's Response: Aww yay! I'm so glad that you enjoyed it so much :D I'm writing the next chapter right now, so it's on its way!

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Review #2, by beka_wotter 

9th November 2015:
I LOVE this story so much, it's so addicting and so I need you to update please haha, it's just so good!! And you definitely deserved the Dobby award!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have updated for you :P I'm still in shock over my win haha

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Review #3, by HarryandGinnyForEver 

1st November 2015:
So I just read this whole story in one sitting because IT'S SO AMAZING AND I CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT CHAPTER!!
P.S congrats on your dobby award, you completely and wholeheartedly deserve it!!

Author's Response: Aw, really? I'm so happy that you love it that much! And thank you so much! I am still in shock that I got one :D

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Review #4, by Helva 

29th October 2015:
Wow! I love your story - I don't even know how to express how much! It's simply incredible!! :D
I have so many thoughts, but I'll content myself with just writing down a few ;) First of all, at the beginning I was often impatient and annoyed with Abigail, with how she didn't stand up for herself and wouldn't end her "friendship" with Michelle. But over the course of the chapters I realised that it is very hard to break old ingrained thought and behaviour patterns - you did a really good job of showing this through your writing. I also like that you are keeping the whole Abigail-Michelle problem in the story, it would take a long time for Abigail to truly let go of it and your story is a lot more realistic for it.
Rebecca's character seems a bit over the top, but then that's maybe because I've never met anybody who is actually like this. I sure hope she'll let go of her messed up conception that James needs to be with her (or is it that a girl she considers lesser than herself has gotten the boy?)...
I like many of your OCs, but I'm especially intrigued by Ethan. I've always had a weakness for slightly tragic, serious, self-sacrificing guys haha ;) Are we going to see more of him?
And last but not least: the comics sound AMAZING, both Abigail's and her father's! It would be amazing to seen them "drawn down"!

If I understand correctly you want to continue this story all through their seventh year? Or will that be the sequel?

I'm immensely looking forward to the next chapter!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much, Helva.

I'm sorry that frustrated you at the beginning, but I wanted to show that it's hard to break from that, like you said. Even now she's still struggling and she's out of it, and I worried that maybe it was dragging, but I'm so glad that you think it works.

She's so horrible isn't she? She's a spoilt brat who thinks that she can get her own way and push Abigial out of the picture, because Abigail is a push over in her eyes. It's definitely a mixture of the two.

There is going to be more Ethan! Don't you worry! He's in quite a few more chapters coming up.

Oh man! I am going to work on trying to make chapter images that are like the comic books.

I do want to, that's going to be a sequel and I already have 7 chapters of that written, and it's completely planned out, so I'm hoping to have a lot more written before I finish this.

Thank you so much!

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Review #5, by Gi9 

11th October 2015:
I don't think you've ever written a boring chapter XD James and Abi are adorable together. And I can't wait to find out what Isabella did to Rebecca! I don't want Isabella to get in trouble for hitting that cow, but she really deserves a lesson and Abi is just too good to be able to stand up to her...she should take some self defence class ;)

I just realized that, since most of your stories are connected, Roxanne may be the same Roxanne in Beat It. She seems very different, maybe because she was younger, obviously.

Please update soon!! I love reading this story ;)

Author's Response: Awww thank you *hugs* I love writing about those two, I think they are by far my favourite couple that I've written together.
Rebecca does deserve a lesson, and Isabella is ready to teach her haha, but I'm hoping that one day Abigail will stand up to her.

Yes! She is the same Roxanne from Beat It :D You are right!

I've updated now :D Thank you so much

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Review #6, by HarryGinnyLove88 

23rd September 2015:
I hope Isabella hit Rebecca very hard :)

Write soon :)

Author's Response: She totally has to! She needs to be hit.

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