2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by FriendofMolly 

21st October 2015:
I'm wavering now as the addition of the Dursleys and their change of attitude.
You really need to have someone else look at your work as the spelling errors are increasing. I know you have an awesome idea for the story, but spelling errors and other grammatical missteps can detract from it.

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Review #2, by poobear 

12th August 2015:
Hay There
A tip top chapter and a good ending so makes you think what will happen next ? prob bad things knowing harry lol.
I very much look forward to the next chapter from you to come you are doing so good keep up the good work you are doing.
By for now and i hope you have a great weekend to come yours as always.

Author's Response: Thanks poobear i really appreciate it a lot. i was wondering if you had read it yet. it will be full of surprises in the chapters to come when the next one becomes official i hope you like it.

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