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3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by PixiePaige 

20th December 2015:
Good start. I love Drarry so I'm excited to see where you go with this story!

Author's Response: This is not going to be a Drarry story sorry they are friends nothing more.

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Review #2, by FriendofMolly 

21st October 2015:
I love AtB stories, so I stopped when I saw this one. Though I see many grammatical errors, it's mainly capitalization. Also different subject matter needs it's own paragraph and paragraphs start with indentation. I was hoping for some actual conversational instead of narrative, but you've got my interest. So I'll continue with the rest.
PS I applaud you for staying mostly canon. Even though JKR has said Harry and Ron didn't return to Hogwarts, I'd like to think they might have at least tried.

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Review #3, by poobear 

30th July 2015:
Hi There
A very good start even tho it was a bit on the short side but a very good start none the less and look forward to more coming from you.
By for now and i hope you have a great weekend to come.
Bruce x

Author's Response: Thank you poobear that was greatly appreciated. i really likedd the fact that you were honest about it being on the short side. and yes i will write more. it has been great talking with you . you are very great as a reviewer. thank you

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