2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by merlins beard 

6th August 2015:
Hey Lea,

I'm here reviewing this for Molly and my Addicted to Albus and Scorpius challenge.

I really like how you worked on the prompt that we gave you. A midnight swim is such a fun idea. If I was at Hogwarts I'd probably do it all the time.

I really enjoyed how they were just close friends when they went for their swim, but far more than that when they got back. It was such a vulnerable moment for both of them, such a internal battle to decide if they could risk exposing their feelings to each other.

I really like what you came up with, and I can't wait to see what you're going to do with the other prompts we gave you.

The results will be up soon(ish),keep an eye out for them.


Author's Response: Thanks so much!

I have the third chapter written, and I'm still working on the second one which is proving to be the hardest to write.

I'm so glad I entered this challenge as I have never really written Albus and Scorpius! Thank you for the wonderful prompts which really inspired me to write.


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Review #2, by May 

7th July 2015:
I loved it great story really looking forward to the next one

Author's Response: Thanks May, it should be up soon.


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