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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by EnigmaticEyes16 

8th October 2015:
Hi! I am back to continuing reading and reviewing this!

I loved the bit with the falcon and how he's all protective and alert. I thought that was a really cute tidbit to include.

Oh no, poor Draco! To be confronted like that in public and be surrounded by the mob. I can't believe they swarm him like that, jostling him and such. Thank Merlin, Harry saved him from their cruelty. It seems like Draco has been through enough already and regrets his actions during the war.

And Draco must have definitely changed to be so determined to thank Harry for sticking up for him even though they've both hated each other for years. I'm very curious to see what this year will bring for Draco.

I did notice a few tiny mistakes here and there, nothing another read through wouldn't fix. Or maybe you could get a beta to look over your chapters for you.

But all in all this was a great second chapter and I will be reading on.


Author's Response: I'm glad you like this bit too!

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Review #2, by AtrociousFangirl 

11th September 2015:
I couldn't keep the goofy grin off my face while reading this, Harry defending Draco is the cutest thing ever! *fangirl squeals*
*falls off Sir Butterhoof*

Author's Response: Drarry is always cute :P

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