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7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Ninja in Training 

3rd January 2016:
I love all the fluff!

Author's Response: Me too!!! :D

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Review #2, by oldershouldknowbetter 

28th June 2015:
Hi there back again for more reviewing.

I am doing so for the house cup and of course for Ravenclaw - still going have to reach the target don't you know.

We open with some very protective pancake eaters - William will learn and he should do so fast I think.

When who should turn up but Michelle. I like how you've made Abigail not just go from one state into another - friend and almost under Michelle's thumb to strong and independent. There would be some transition time and you tackle it well. Abigail knowing that she should be tougher in herself, but then again self confidence was always her weakest point.

Isabella though is almost strong enough for the both of them, the way she dishes it out to Michelle. It is as Abigail feared, Michelle is blaming this all on her. Well it will be a matter of time, but we all know (hope) that Abigail will become stronger herself.

Again, all that time they were spending being just friends comes to the fore and James behaves perfectly, knowing Abigail almost better than she knows herself. No that's not quite right, making her be the better person that he knows she should become. We can really see that he will be the one to bring her confidence and get her out of her self-doubting rut.

I do like though that James does have a bit of shyness around her - it does make him more adorable and helps to humanise him. The constructed rose from the ruined comic book is a great device.

And it all ends with a kiss.

Andrew,
Oldershouldknowbetter.

Author's Response: Wo!!!

Oh you don't mess with Isabella's pancakes, William will learn... when he ends up losing fingers haha

It's going to take some time, and Abigail will struggle a lot with it, and you're right, her self confidence isn't that good even though she's been getting a lot better.

She really is, she'll be there to make sure that Abigail doesn't fall back into the Michelle trap.

He really does, he's there to help her too, he's going to bring out her confidence.

He is so shy bless him *hugs him*

THank you so much Andrew!


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Review #3, by ShannonRay 

1st March 2015:
Hi! soo i read this story quite a while ago when the latest chapter was chapter 11! and then I just forgot about it, I didn't have an account then so i couldn't add it to currently reading or favourites so it happened. I got really excited when I saw this in the recently updated thingy! and i re-read the first 11 chapters then i read to chapter 28 in a day! I am so pleased with how you made the story, even though it was heart breaking when i read it I am so glad that you added some drama with them getting together! Though Im very glad that they're together happily now! I really want Isabella and Willaim together! though i feel kind of sorry for Sian all the time... I'm probably over sensitive! I really cannot wait for Abigail to tell James about her dad, I hope he is just excited not annoyed she didn't tell him- she needs to tell him sonn! i just can't. I am terribly sorry for the bad grammar in this review- and that some of the 'i'S are not capital- on my laptop it doesn't automatically make them capital and then i cant be bothered to change them and yeah, and also my laptop also liked to autocorrect things to change the words so you may have to guess on some words because i cannot face changing them all thought I've tried with some... yeah i need a beta for my reviews :') ANYWAY as always keep writing you are great and fab woo yeah.. update soon :)

Author's Response: Hello ShannonRay! Aww yay! I'm so glad that you came back to this story and I'm so happy that you're enjoying it! I'm sorry about my late reply.

Wow and entire day! That's a great achievement! *gives cookies* There was going to be some drama, I didn't want it to be easy for them to get together. There's going to be more drama soon though, it's not all going to be plain sailing for those two.

I feel sorry for Sian too, I really need to include her more, she's quite happy though, so no need to feel too sorry for her.

I want Isabella and William to get together too! I have a spin off planned for them actually haha.

She does need to tell him soon! but she's worried, which I can understand.

Awww that's perfectly fine! IT's an absolutely perfect review and I love it and you so much! :D

Thank you so much! You are the best person ever! :D *squishes you tightly*


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Review #4, by james101 

28th February 2015:
Ive been reading 'Beat It' for a while now and i saw the name Abigail so i decided to check out this story and its brilliant

I cant believe that Michelle thinks that Sian would ever take her side...

Isabella and William were cute because they have that funny sarcastic type relationship...And when Isabella mentioned kissing Ethan you could tell that William did not like the sound of that one bit ; D

And finally James and Abigail were completely adorable with the presents and James sweetly watching her...Utterly adorable

Author's Response: Aw yay! I hope that you like this story too!

I hate Michelle, and Sian wouldn't have taken her side at all. Michelle needs to just go away, she's done enough damage.

I love William and Isabella, they are so much fun to write :D And yep, William is so jealous haha.

Yay! I'm so glad that you liked them :D Thank you for reading and reviewing!


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Review #5, by burli 

25th February 2015:
It is always sooo nice to read your story. Your writting is nice and good and I could get lost in it and read and reread and reread it again. :) Anyways: good chapter as always, they are so lovely together and that makes me happy :)
I would love to follow this story 'til the (hopefully un-) bitter end. Maybe you could switch the POVs in this one between Abi and James and do a spin off of William? I love him and would like to know more about his backround, etc.
So, keep it up :)

Author's Response: Thank you for such a wonderful review! You are so awesome! I hope that you like the future chapters I have in store for you! :D

There is going to be quite some time until the end and I'm sticking with this until it's finished! :D I think that I'm definitely going to have this as a Abigail/James PoV with a few chapters from William and Isabella's pov. James' pov will start from their seventh year.

There will be more background information on them all coming soon! :D


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Review #6, by macpp 

24th February 2015:
ahh love this! they are so cute! I'd love James POV but maybe do isobel/William in a spin off? or in here if you'd like as I like them as characters so I think it'd work either way :)

Author's Response: Thank you! And I love you for leaving me an awesome review and for loving this so much. :D
Okay, I think that an Isobella and William spin-off is necessary! I think I'm going to have this as a James and Abigail pov story. :D


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Review #7, by Leah 

24th February 2015:
Ackkk this is so beautiful I love them together!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! :D I'm trying to make them as cute as possible :P

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