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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by A FAn 

11th February 2015:
PLease update soon. Waiting!

Author's Response: I will, I promise! I feel bad already for keeping everybody waiting again. The chapter is basically finished (and it's a long one) but I still have to polish it a little. School is a little busy at the moment (lots of papers due) But I will sumbmit the chapter tonight...

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Review #2, by padfootandmoony 

8th February 2015:
Great chapter! I love Seth's character, and I feel so bad for her with how uncooperative James is being haha. Looking forward to finding out if her plan for the potion to help Sam and his girlfriend works!! Good job :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much!!! I'm really glad Seth is likable :) and, yes, James isn't exactly helpfull haha. The next chapter is almost finished and should be in the queue by tonight! Thanks again for reviewing! It really means a lot!!!

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Review #3, by happyanon 

7th February 2015:
i dont know where seth stands. Frankly I think she's making a big deal from sam's potions more than it should be but i guess if thats the way of how shell bond with james then great. I like her with james. Just being her sarcastic self rather than her sweety steety with albus. Im shipping her slightly more with james. Although its a bit cliche the love hate, im not denying that i enjoy it. I look forward to more updates. Much love! Xoxo

Author's Response: I know what you mean with Seth making a big deal out of this situation. The thing is that at sixteen (at least as I remember it) some things just seem so much worse than they really are and many problems get blown out of proportion.. I know it was like that with me at least... haha. But Hogwarts is also a strict school and Sam and Felicity would get into trouble already for the mere fact that they were having sex. With the potion, Seth is trying to kill two birds with one stone; firstly getting rid of the stolen ingredients and secondly helping a friend. SHe does see the flaws, however, such as being too late or Felicity being pregnant.

And yes, the story incorporates a lot of cliches, I cannot (and don't want to) deny that. Frankly, I like cliche stories when they are well done and I like writing them :). I'm trying to be as original as possible in the realisation of those cliches, though... if that makes any sense... :)

Thank you so much for taking the time to review! I really really appreciate it! Have a great day :) xo

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Review #4, by TheEighthHorcrux 

6th February 2015:
The tension is finally starting to build up. I love how we get to see some more James/Seth action. Really good chapter. I hope you update soon and keep up the good work :)

Author's Response: I just woke up to your review and it made my morning :) Thank you so much!

I loved writing this chapter, especially James. The next one should be ready to upload next week :) Thank you again for taking the time to comment!

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