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4 Reviews Found

Review #1, by windbirdsong 

25th September 2016:
albus is such a cutie in this scene, i mean, they are not my otp´, but they are quite adorable haha I don't have a clear face of every character of this story, but I always see albus as logan lerman, probably because every author puts him as al.. but he is perfect for the role don't you think?
I wonder what would have happened if she had invited al to sit with them back there.. the whole story would have had a completely different direction :O
I always cringe at their hug haha awkward hug incident indeed :DD
I wonder who is"she" that vala and demeter were talking about? they wouldn't be interested in seth this early in the story?
wonderful chapter as alwaysss♥♥♥

Author's Response: Haha, yeah Al is quite cute... a little weird, but cute. ANd I agree, Logan Lerman would be perfect for the job :)

The hug was indeed cringe-worthy... but I think Seth wouldn't even have invited Al to sit with them if it had been a good hug :D... Boys are just not her forte.

Again, thank you you wonderful person for taking the time to re-read and review the story. This is just the best!

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Review #2, by DessieWeasley 

1st December 2014:
I really like your story so update soon!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comment! I am going to update tomorrow so the next chapter should be up Saturday/Sunday :).

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Review #3, by Missy 

30th November 2014:
This is so well written!! i really like all the current "muggle" pop culture references, makes it really relatable. And I love Seth and Katie as characters. Please please continue writing!

Author's Response: Hello Missy!
Thank you so much! It makes me really happy to know someone's enjoying my writing! I'm glad you like the pop culture references. I feel like the wizarding world, especially the younger generations, would actually embrace muggle pop culture and know Miley Cyrus or TopShop; it just makes sense.

Thanks again for taking the time to review! I will probably update tomorrow and, if the queue isn't too long, it should be up by Sunday.

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Review #4, by Leanna Drobis 

30th November 2014:
James is a pri*k but... I can't wait for their first encounter. Can't wait for your next update!

Author's Response: Hello Leanna!
First of all, thank you so much for reading and for taking the time to review all chapters!!! This is just amazing; I was over the moon when I saw my unanswered review count this morning :)

You are right, ALbus is way nicer than James (or at least what we know of James) and yes, there might be a little Al/Seth chemistry going on; however, essentially the story is about James and Seth. I have been told that is is unusual for fanfics to progress so slowly and that James is introduced so late but I just feel like I want to show Seth's character before having her interact with James. He will definitely be in the upcoming chapter, though, life and in person :).

I will definitely finish this story! Sometimes it takes a little longer to update because I don't uplaod anything before I am sure it's the best I can do. But I try to update once a week (if the queue allows it, that is).

Well, thank you thank you thank you again! I hope you come back for the next (very James centred) chapter :)

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