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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by The Ultimate Harry Potter Fan 

17th July 2017:
Great job! Keep up the good work!
This is an amazing Harry Potter Fan Fiction!
I wish I was as good as you!
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Review #2, by windbirdsong 

25th September 2016:
you know what I also really love about this fic? you give your characters so much life and personality!!
Tarquin is amazing, I've really liked him since you've first introduced him here..his obsession with katie could seriously be so creepy, but the way you write it, make it seem like the most adorable lovesick puppy ever haha I love it!
i can definitely simpatize with bernice back there haha I def been in those social situations that you don't know what to do lol so much for social anxiety amirite
poor katie and seth :\ I know that nothing really happened, but I can only imagine her desperation seeing her best friend like that!

Author's Response: You aweseome person you!!! I can't believe you're reviewing my older chapters... this is the nicest thing ever, seriously!

I am really really sorry for this late reply to all of your lovely reviews. I was swamped at work and couldn't get myself to type a reply that is worthy of your comments :) I hope you can forgive me!

I am so so glad you feel this way about the characters... I do try very hard to make them relatable.

And I agree about Tarquin... he could be creepy but he's just the sweetest :D

I had several BErnice moments in my life so I completely understand haha

THANK YOU so much again for doing this, you are seriously awesome!!!


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Review #3, by Leanna Drobis 

30th November 2014:
I am confused. Is it going to be James or Albus... Am I being stupid? Though Albus is seems way nicer James is well James.

Author's Response: Haha, "James is, well, James". I love that.

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Review #4, by HedwigAlways 

30th October 2014:
Loovvve it... please try to update regularly..!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I will :). The next chapter is already in the queue! Thank you for reading and reviewing :)

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Review #5, by Ashlumos1888 

26th October 2014:
I really like this story! I think it's very well written for one thing- sorry if it makes me sound like a prat, but it really puts me off a story when there's loads of obvious spelling/grammar mistakes in- and the characters are all pretty realistic and likeable, Seth in particular. I'll definitely read the next chapter when it comes up!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! You don't sound like a prat at all; grammar and spelling (and also language in general) are really important to me when I read/write a story! I'm glad to hear that you like my characters and particularly Seth!

The next chapter will be up soon! It should be in the queue by tonight :). Thanks for reviewing, it really really means a lot!


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Review #6, by happyanon 

25th October 2014:
You know I've often seen this fanfic when scrolling around next gen and for weeks I've been ignoring it because of the few chapters in and that it isnt finished yet. But for some reason, like today I just went to hell with it and clicked and i am very Happy I did. See I love how the decriptions of the waves and the trees are. I love how Seth is her nickname and that she has a cousin called Vala. I love that she's a ravenclaw and her friend is not a wotter. I am now very curious as to what really was happening in that detention room. The whisper of sorry sounds like someone under the invisibility cloak. I wonder why Albus has been looking at her. They are in the same year right?? Very interesting.. also how will james factor into all of this. Im looking forward to more updates! Xoxo

Author's Response: Dear happyanon!
First of all, thank you so much for taking the time to review! I am glad you stumbled across my story :) and even more that you like it so far! I love that you love Seth's name and the fact that she is not part of the Wotter group; it would be highly out of character for introverted, socially awkward Seth to be friends with the outgoing, popular kids :).

Albus is acting a little weird but we'll soon know why. He is in fifth while Seth and Katie are in sixth but since Seth dosen't turn sixteen before September 26, the age difference is actually minimal. And James will become more important in the following chapters ;).

Again, thanks for giving my story a chance even though it is a work in progress! You really made my day with this review! I am going to update regularily (if the queue allows it) :). You are awesome! xo


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