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Review #1, by Ninja in Training 

3rd January 2016:
Such lovely fluff :)

Author's Response: Gotta love the fluff! :D

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Review #2, by lee 

30th December 2015:
This chapter is honestly so cute! I love the ending and how endearing James and Abegail are. You are such a great writer!

Author's Response: Aw thank you :D That brings me so much happiness. You're the best reviewer ever! :D

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Review #3, by oldershouldknowbetter 

23rd January 2015:
Review#21: the review which starts to make stuff (and I donít just mean out of wood).

We donít know what Muggle Studies was like from anything that JKR wrote in her books. I like your focus (for this year of their studies at least) on the various Muggle hobbies Ė it is a good device which you have used well to further your plot. And now we have to two of them attempting wood work, I wonder how that is going to go Ö

They are just barely cutting the wood.

Partly that is because there is so much talking and what talking it is. Abigail just misses so much like James calling her cute and sexy for instance. Yes, I know it has to do with her sick voice, but she just marches over it. She is flirting nearly as badly with him too, like when she cheekily pokes her tongue out at him.
Abigail makes a crack about Jamesí ego and he replies:

ďAbigail Higgs, you are down right evil today. This cold is making you delirious.Ē

No itís not it is just freeing her of some of her inhibitions.

And just in time too as James invites her for a cloak inspired rendezvous. Though I donít know how much the sickness will interfere.

Apparition is on the Horizon.

Michelle is acting weirdly. Not as like she has done in the past, treating her like dirt; no itís different. I wonder whether it is the presence of other possible friends which has been holding her back? She knows that if she pulls the sort of stuff that she has done in the past to poor Abigail in front of them they may just call her on her nastiness.

Abigail goes out on her date which isnít a date.
James shows her his cloak. And lets her wear it.

And he shows her the Map!

Wow, that is a lot of trusting and heís hugging her and putting his hand on her face and all sorts of stuff Ė WAKE UP YOU TWO!

We learn that Michelle has been sneaking off as well as acting strange. We knew she had been absent a lot, but actively sneaking off and not saying anything to her supposed best friend Ė something is going on. And the cloak arrives just in time to advance the plot. Itís a nice little piece of convenience which isnít too forced and drives the plot along nicely. Otherwise you would have to contrive Abigail just finding out by happenstance. No, if she was going to become closer to James she would eventually learn about the Cloak and the Map so it is as I said not too forced a coincidence.

Oh this is a date alright. The food, the supplies the comics and staying out all night wrapped up in Jamesí arms. Come on guys, tell her your secret already James, and Abigail just admit to yourself and to him all the feelings you have been having are true and real.

Author's Response: I was struggling to think of what they would learn in Muggle Studies and I thought, why not have muggle hobbies? It would be so cool to see what they think that Muggles do in their spare time! But their woodwork skills are as great as most Muggle's woodwork skills :P

Oh they should definitely stop talking if they want to finish their work, but we don't want that at all! Stay flirting you two! Abigail is so oblivious to James' comments, she just thinks that he's being nice, when in fact he's admitting his undying love for her!! ... or near enough :P

They are both flirting so badly with each other, if William was there he would just be shaking his head at them for not admitting their feelings to each other.

Michelle is definitely acting suspicious, she's up to something! We all know it!

Oh yes, the date that isn't a date but is totally a date! With added hugging, hands on face and just kiss already!

It's definitely a date! I agree with you! He should definitely admit to his secret! and she should admit that she likes him!

Thank you once again! :D

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Review #4, by Water_Fay 

12th September 2014:
I haven't read a story this fast on here in a long time. I love the pace and the time hops. It's never too much and makes it so the story doesn't drag. I just started reading yesterday and was so into it that I already finished the chapters you have up so far! I love it! Can't wait for the next chapter!!

Author's Response: Aw really? Oh wow, that's made my entire week/month/year/lifetime. I'm so incredibly touched that you love my story so much and my writing. Thank you so so much! More is on it's way!

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Review #5, by potterfan310 

4th September 2014:

Woodwork, what a subject. One of the most pointless ones ever I think, I once made a box that now sits around empty. So much for useful :p Poor James and Abi, though is it wise allowing James to use a hammer? XD Somehow I feel James' product would be like Patrick's clock from The Perks of Being a Wallflower, I cannot see otherwise :p


Snowball, oh my god that cat is a cutie!

Loratio ♥

"Yeah, it takes a lot to not sneak around and spy on people, or go places I'm not meant to." - I don't know why but I get the feeling that maybe James has spied on Abigail, maybe that's his secret. Hmm.. Or he's been in the Hufflepuff common room???

You have no idea how many times towards the end I was thinking they were going to kiss, but nooo my hopes were crushed. But still they are practically cuddling!!!

Can't wait for the next one!

Sophie :D

Author's Response: Hey!

It really is, isn't it? I made a box too that does nothing and doesn't even have anything in it haha. Oh no, it's not wise at all letting James have any dangerous objects around him. Haha yes! YES IT WOULD! Hahahahaa

He does! He's so smitten with her and she won't believe it, I just want to shake her and make her see! You can buy a James at all good Potter shops :P


Maybe James has, the little stalker he is! :D I wouldn't put it passed James to have gone into every common room.

Aw, you have no idea how many times my muse keeps trying to make them before it's time to do so!

Thank you so much Sophie! You are so awesome and I love you!

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Review #6, by asdfghjkl 

3rd September 2014:
omg so i'm reading this in my dorm right now and my roommate is sitting just across the room and i am for real holding in a squeal so she doesn't think i'm totally crazy. this is so freaking cute i can hardly stand it!!

Author's Response: Hahaha I hope your roommate doesn't think you're too crazy hehe. I'm so glad that you love the story so much!
Thanks for being awesome! :D

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Review #7, by HarryGinnyLove88 

31st August 2014:
aww... they are cute :)

love this story, hope you write soon ;)

Author's Response: I just want to squish them so much!

Thank you so much hun! I love your reviews!

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