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Review #1, by HebrideanBlack 

27th February 2016:

10/10 (of course)

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Review #2, by water_lily43175 

3rd December 2015:
Scary author note is scary. HERE GOES.

Oh, and this whole chapter just broke me. I HATE YOU. I had the smallest tinge of sympathy for Druella when she seemed to care about Andromeda and not want to have to watch Walburga punish her. But then her reaction to that was to walk out and leave Andromeda alone with them, and not to stand up for her own daughter.

And Walburga ... there are just no words.

Ugh, my heart breaks for Tedromeda. It's crazy, they're both being so selfless, which incidentally is the most beautiful character development for Andromeda in particular, and yet neither of them will give in. Although let's face it, Andromeda is the only one who should be giving in. MARRY HIM DROMEDA. I don't know why I'm telling her to marry Ted, given that she DOES. But ... BECAUSE of the curse? I DON'T KNOW ANYTHING ANY MORE.


Author's Response: :D :D :D

Jk, I'm sorry. I'm really sorry. This was a horrible chapter, wasn't it? I'M SORRY.

It made me so happy to finally write Andromeda as selfless and feel as though she'd earned it. But. . .not so much in this context. WAAAH.

Thanks for the review! Even though I was horrible!

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Review #3, by TumTum 

9th October 2014:
Hi! This is just superb I love it. It's all so well thought through and well written. The character development is especially great - I love Ted and Andromeda, I think you nailed them and what it is that they find appealing in each other and gosh the chemistry between them is great. I would very much like them to get together please.

I also love Nelson, Sirius, George and Lillith. Narcissa is very well done although I can't make myself like her too much because I suspect she won't be a good sister to Andromeda.

Reading this has twists me up though just thinking about how many of these characters (characters that Andromeda cares for) are going to die in the books. Just ugh, it's got me wondering how she copes through that time and what her relationship with Teddy is like? Or how you imagine her relationship with Remus and especially Tonks played out? Don't suppose you would ever do a sequel in the next gen years? I'm being greedy sorry.

I had it in my head when I was reading this that it was finished and was horrified when I got to the last chapter because I thought that you decided to leave it on a grim note of foreboding. I'm definitely looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: Why, hello! I'm tickled pink to hear that you've enjoyed the story so far.

I'm rather partial to all of these characters, too. Heh. But yes, I'm afraid tough times are coming up for Narcissa and Andromeda. That's something I've been simultaneously looking forward to (because the writing will be strangely therapeutic) but dreading (because the writing will be so, so painful). WAH. D:

Ugh. I try not to think about how many people in this story are going to die. It puts me in a terrible funk. But yes! Once I've finished KYD, I really would like to write a collection of short stories on Ted & Andromeda's life together--especially the birth and growth of sweet ickle Tonks. :)

Oh gosh, no! No, as much as I love my cliffhangers, I would never leave the story on such a bleak note. Haha. Never fear, I intend to write a much happier ending than that. And I HOPE I'll have a brand new chapter in the queue today.

Thank you so much for such a sweet review! Hope you continue to enjoy the read. :)

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Review #4, by MarieBlack 

15th September 2014:

I do rather like this plot twist though, it makes absolute sense with their thinking and all that jazz. I can't imagine they just let them leave the family unscathed honestly, because they are so terribly violent and ruthless people at heart. It makes me unbearably sad for Ted and Dromeda though.

I read this some time ago admittedly but I just found some time to write a proper review.

Walburga is awful but she is clearly represented as who Bellatrix takes after in their family. Like most obviously with her sadistic attitude of punishment. I like to think Cissa takes after their mother, much more reserved and not nearly as out right cruel. She let's Walburga handle that. So in a way it's like their personalities are lived out in those two. But Dromeda, she is like them in ways but also Ted has had this amazing impact on her. It's the coolest thing to see!

And I feel so bad for them and you need to write more and okay. Happy writing!

Author's Response: You didn't think I'd make it THAT easy, did you?! Haha.

And yes, it's extremely tough to put Ted and Dromeda through, but I have a master plan! We'll just see if it pans out like it should... :]

Yes! I see the Walburga/Bellatrix and Druella/Narcissa parallel in much the same way. As psycho as Bellatrix ends up becoming, I knew there had to be several events in her past that influenced her sadistic know-how. And sweet Auntie Walburga is certainly one of them.

Thanks so much for the reviewww! Things are super hectic IRL, but I hope to have a new chapter posted soon!

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Review #5, by lookatthatfanfiction 

7th September 2014:
Stayed up all night reading this, I couldn't stop!! I've never given much thought to Ted and Andromeda's relationship before but this story is now one of my all time favourites! Please update the next chapter soon,you can't leave it on such a cliffhanger, I need to know more!!!

Author's Response: A binge read! YAY! Binge reads are my favorite. :] I am SO glad that you not only charged through the whole story, but also that you're rooting for Tedromeda. They're my top ship in all of Harry Potter, and it's been such fun to write something that's canon but has a ton of loose ends and leeway.

I'm bad at cliffhangers. -guilty face- But I'm hard at work on the next chapter, and I hope to post it soon!

Thanks so much for the lovely review!

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Review #6, by marauderfan 

4th September 2014:
Ugh, Walburga is terrible, and that whole scene was incredibly chiling. I just.. ugh. Can't anything ever be easy for this couple?! They've been through so much already, and deserve some happiness!
I hope they find a way around that curse. I mean, I know they get married eventually, but I didn't imagine it was because they HAD to. Man, that is the worst. I can't blame Andromeda for being freaked out by marriage, but... well, at least they're being honest with each other now, so maybe things will get easier. I hope. Please? :p Great chapter though!

Author's Response: Walburga is an awful human being. :( I'm glad that the scene was chilling, though! Not in a sadistic way, of course, but just that it accomplished what I set out to accomplish.

Tedromeda haven't had an easy road, and it's certainly not getting easier, is it? But of course they will prevail in the end, however long it takes to get to that end! And YES. Honesty is key, and they've got that going for them at least. There's hope for them yet.

Thanks so much for the review!

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Review #7, by Celestialbattlefield 

2nd September 2014:
"in an instant andromeda went cold..it felt as.though her blood had turned into anicy sludge"
:0 (no.) ooh amazing simile.gothic awesomeness

" see if he wants you now mudblood *" :'( >:'(
die walburga die! what kind of name do you possess anyway..DIE
"i dont want to marry you!"
DO U WANT A SLAP!! stop playing hard to get and take your man and run away to jamaica OK!!
marry him lift the curse and b happy

"pain welled in andromedas chest..sharp and acidic"
...lemons.damn it :(
" dromeda we were made to be close" ahh :)

ok this isnt evn a review just random jumbles of quotes nd thoughts.

when does all the drama end?
i dont thnk dromeda eill ever marry ted willingly BRUTE FORCE REQUIRED.

Author's Response: Hahaha, what kind of name DOES Walburga possess? Seriously, everyone who has ever named a kid in the Black household deserves to be held accountable--especially Andromeda. Much as I love her, what kind of name is Nymphadora?

I liked your random jumble of quotes and thoughts. Thanks for taking the time to share them! Haha. And just wait. Andromeda might be taking her sweet time, but she may see reason yet. :)

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