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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by UnluckyStar57 

5th August 2014:
Oh dear... Right when I thought that Molly and Fitz were going to have a rational conversation, they go and start snogging again. :) It really isn't a bad problem to have, but right now I'm wondering how they can possibly keep this up without McCormack finding out. I'm also wondering if there's any way for them to change McCormack's mind about her no-romance policy? That would make things easier, certainly, but a whole lot less fun/awkward. :D

Of course they lost. How could they win against a top five team? I think it's incredibly realistic, and although some of the team members are a bit upset, it's going to be worth it in the long run. And maybe next year they can take the league!

Hilarion and Lucy just keep getting cuter. Like, seriously, could you have written a cuter couple? Probably not. While Molly and Fitz are a bit like tigers--sort of wild and things like that--Lucy and Hilarion are like Pygmy Puffs. They're so cute! And Hilarion is really of a rare breed--a super handsome guy who's almost embarrassed by his looks? That's unheard of in fanfiction! Which is why I'm glad that you wrote about it. :D

This chapter was going along so swimmingly--no fights, no arguments, just some yelling and gruffness from Fitz--until the end happened and everything got messed up again. What could the Beaters have said to each other to make them start brawling?! They've really got to work on that, especially since the Prides are just starting to become a reputable team again and McCormack won't like hearing about the fight. Hopefully things will work out...

Jinks continues to make me laugh. He's such a goof. I love the personality that he's developing throughout the story! And also, I'm seriously in awe of you for being able to balance the characterizations of so many characters! It's such a wonderful story to read, and it makes me very happy. :D


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Review #2, by AlexFan 

30th July 2014:
I remember saying that I didn't mind Mariah because she hadn't really done anything to make me hate her but I take that back now. AINT NOBODY GOT TIME FOR A HOMEWRECKER. Mariah needs to check herself before she wrecks herself, I feel like this girl doesn't see boundaries.

I don't even know much about Hilarion since I haven't read the other stories and I'm already protective of him. But I love the relationship that he and Lucy have. They're just so in love with each other and they trust each other completely. I like how you include little bits and pieces about what makes them perfect for each other. Flora sounds like an absolute sweetie pie. I kind of want to see Lucy hanging around the Prides more often because I just want to see how she interacts with them.

OOOH DRAMA IS HAPPENING. DRAMA LLAMA. I'm excited to find out what the Beaters got into a argument over (it had to be something pretty big if they started throwing punches.

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Review #3, by LightLeviosa5443 

7th July 2014:
Hi!! Crazy is back for more!!

I cannot believe I let myself fall so far behind... On the plus side that means review spamming you!!! Hooray!!

Oh my goodness. I love that you've started this chapter out with Fitz in all of his crazy raging glory. It's so wonderful and so fun and I love the fact that Jinks is totally nonchalant about it all. The "See, it's a sign of affection." was perfect. Why are you starting off a chapter so perfectly? Not fair! Haha, how awkward for Molly that people want her to give away secrets about her brother-in-law's team. I love that she stays tight-lipped and carefully goes about it. She's so great. Have I said I love your characterisation of her? Well, I do. A lot. LOLing at Beathan right now. Also, awkward for her that people are hitting on her brother-in-law.

Yes!!! Molly and Fitz are on the same level with this whole Mariah thing. Ugh, can we just take her out of the equation? She complicates EVERYTHING. I hate her. I really do. BEST LINE OF THE FIC SO FAR She really wanted to kiss him again. PLEASE DO, MOLLY, PLEASE DO.

YES. MOLLY. PUT HIM IN HIS PLACE. I love how honest she is. She doesn't sugarcoat anything and just tells it like it is and honestly, I want to be like Molly. Your Molly is the person I want to be. No joke. I love that he just closed the distance between them. I love that she's closing even more distance. I love their chemistry. I love them. They love them. Let's just make it a thing now, yeah? Okay, cool.

Uh oh. Uh oh uh oh uh oh. So was it Mariah or McCormack? Ugh. Poor Molly. I want to snuggle her and make her feel better. Ugh oh. Fitz is drinking. I don't know if that's good, or bad. At least we know he cares, kind of. AWE. Poor Fitz. I love Max, what a good friend. Fitz really does care. THIS WHOLE STORY IS SO EXCITING. I'm trying to stay calm. It's not working. CHARACTER GROWTH I LOVE CHARACTER GROWTH AND FITZ IS GROWING LIKE A ROCKSTAR.

AWE. MOLLY AND LUCY AND A BABY AND WEEE SO CUTE I CANNOT HANDLE IT. I also loved Lucy having to leave with the line "she doesn't understand why daddy can't hold her right now." that explains everything about anything. ALSO. JINKS. LOL. All I have to say about that :P

One more... LOL Jinks. LOL Beathan. I'm glad that they're improving as a team!! Also, I love that Molly had to think to herself that she hoped all the beaters were getting on in a friendly manner. I love that Hilarion and Lucy have such a strong relationship and that Lucy is so confident and so just.. Okay with everything. It's so cute and perfect and I'm jealous and want a relationship like that. So... I want to be like Molly, have chemistry like Molly and Fitz and have a relationship like Lucy and Hilarion. I might make you a graphic for that :P

I WANT THEIR RELATIONSHIP. I LOVE THAT LUCY IS SMUG. YOU GO GIRL. Awe. Awe. Sister bonding. I love that Molly is older and she's asking Lucy what to do and Lucy is so perfectly sympathetic but has no advice and it's just beautiful. OH NO THERE'S A FIGHT ISN'T THERE? I KNEW STUFF COULDN'T BE PERFECT FOREVER. UH OH FITZ IS NOT HAPPY I CAN'T WAIT TO READ THIS NEXT CHAPTER.


Um... So I don't even think I have to say how much I loved this chapter. I think you just know. It was wonderful, as per usual ♥

xoxo Sarah ♥
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Author's Response: Not crazy at all! haha I love to read your reviews. Possibly I'm crazy as well, but that's okay.

Fitz having a temper tantrum on the ground while the team is practising is hilarious to me. I can just see him pacing around and cussing, and once he's got the worst of his temper out, he flies off to yell at them and correct them. Jinks does not take it seriously, for sure, but then he never takes much seriously.

Everybody hits on Hilarion. He's the David Beckham of Quidditch. They all think he's gorgeous, and it embarrasses him, cause he's a shy little homebody at heart.

Molly and Fitz would definitely like Mariah out of the equation, especially Fitz. Molly is honest, and not into sugar-coating, although in part that's because she's correctly assessed Fitz as someone who neither wants nor needs sugar-coating.

I'm hoping I'm showing character growth for Fitz! And for Molly too, of course. Lucy and her baby, yeah, Flora just wants her daddy but he's got to go fly and can't sit with her. And Jinks is a twit XD

I picture the Beaters being the most likely to get into a fight for little to no provocation, on all the teams. haha... They're just crazy people. Big burly sports dudes. In my head, Beaters are the linebackers of Quidditch. They could probably block a Bludger with their heads if needed.

Lucy knows he loves her and isn't worried about women hitting on him, cause she knows he'll just run back to her for protection haha. He loves his wife. Yes, the two of them (and Roxanne and Perry) have a novella for their story. Much shorter than this one.

Thank you so much for reviewing! *hugs*

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Review #4, by Celestie 

5th June 2014:
Hi there! I've been following this story for months now and I figured it was finally time to review! I love that you've been filling out your Next Gen universe so well -- Rose, Molly, Lucy, Victoire and Roxanne have all gotten their own time to shine and your headcanon just seems like it's been filled out so well.

First Perry, now Fitz. I like your male OC's a lot and always end up shipping them with your leads. This story is kind of on the steamier end of what I've read of yours, but that has me shipping Molly and Fitz pretty hard. "Professionalism" is always a good and natural conflict...and I'm interested to see how you'll resolve it. Also interested to see if physical therapy or even surgery will help relieve Fitz's shoulderache.

All in all, I've really enjoyed the ride so far. Just like Roxanne and Lucy, I also find myself liking and rooting for Molly. I'd love to see Molly interact with her parents too -- and Percy's reaction if he knew what his daughter's been up to. Please update soon!

Author's Response: Hi! Thanks for leaving a review, I always love to hear what people think of my stories :D I didn't really intentionally set out to fill in the Next Gen group but it's sort of happening anyway. I'm definitely enjoying writing them all though.

I liked Perry a lot. I did like Hilarion too, but he's not my type of guy ;) This story is a bit steamier, which I think suits Molly better - she's more hard-edged than her sister. Lucy's story is more fluffy and romantic, like her.

There will be more Weasley family interactions, including the parents :) I'm about to post the next chapter this morning. Thank you so much for reviewing! I'm glad you're enjoying this story.

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Review #5, by fangirlfanatic 

29th May 2014:
I just can't get enough of this story! Poor Molly and Fitz, they need to be with each other. I'm shipping them like crazy at the moment.

Author's Response: Yay! I love when people ship my characters ;) Thank you so much for reviewing!

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Review #6, by coolgf 

27th May 2014:
This is a good story. Will we find out more about the rest of the weasleys family ? I liked to hear about rose since you wrote Hugo in, thanks. Also what about Al ? Family dinner ?

Author's Response: Thank you! There will be more Weasley family appearances, but I wasn't planning for Albus to cameo at all. If you want Rose, I've written three novels, a short story, and a couple of one-shots about her! You can start with Just Another Midnight Run for Rose :) I have a novella about Lucy and Roxanne, and virtually every other story I've written has been about the Weasleys, so... if it's labeled Next Gen, it's all part of the same universe for my versions of the characters.

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