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Review #1, by Ginny 

10th March 2014:
Great chapter. I can really see your writing improving during the course of the story.

Author's Response: Thanks again. Seeing as this was my first story, I think my writing does improve a lot. I think you'll notice that in later chapters and the sequel.

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Review #2, by Hogwarts27 

31st January 2014:
Another fine chapter. I enjoyed it from start to finish. I especially liked the Dumbledore scene - you write him so well. Remus is another of my favorite characters, and he was only in this chapter a little, but his dialogue felt good. I like a lot of dialogue in a story and I like it to be in character. This story does that very well. This story is such a nice relaxed read. I'm really enjoying it. Every time I finish a chapter, I'm eager to read the next one.

One typo - who thought you, Harry, to perform a Patronus - You must have meant to type taught

Author's Response: There will definitely be more of Remus to come, but not for a while I think. He's one of my favourite characters too and I would have liked to see more of him in the books.

Thanks for continuing with the story. I really appreciate all your comments and advice.


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