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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by patronus_charm 

16th January 2014:
Haha, it wasn’t too much (in response to your response) so hai gurl! Back for round two!

Haha, the beginning with Lily driving a car was brilliant and had me laughing away! I loved it because I can just imagine her going wild while Harry and Rose wonder whether their life is about to end. There really should be more stories with wizards trying to drive because they’re so much fun to read. The fact that Lily didn’t even know that she could break was hilarious, though I doubt Rose found the situation quite so funny. Aw, Harry’s so cute the way he wants her to learn how to drive while Rose is just like the pavement’s fine thanks.

I really liked how they were good friends and could quickly recover from that incident because they just had a natural way with one another. I bet Lily’s feeling very jealous of Rose’s job though because it sounds just like one she would want to do herself as it involves something with muggles. Another thing I really liked was how you included a lot of characters but I still got a feel for them which was something really nice.

Lily, Rose and Albus were great together and so much fun! I wonder what’s going to happen when Ginny finds out what happened to the pie because I can bet she’s not going to be happy at all. You had to go and leave it on a cliff-hanger though Rose! Great chapter though and I can’t wait to get onto more of your stories!

-Kiana

Author's Response: HAI!

I'm so glad that you picked this story as one of the stories to read! I love this one so much and it's always exciting to see people giving love to it. I had quite a lot of fun writing the scene with Lily driving, at times I thought it didn't flow too well but hey, glad to know that you liked the story anyway! Between Lily and Rose, Rose is the more logical one so she knows that it's a very bad idea getting into a car with Lily.

I imagine that Rose and Lily would spend quite a lot of time together since Lily was probably over more than the other relatives so they've kind of learned to get along with each other and such. I can tell you one thing though, Lily is going to be absolutely ecstatic when she finds out where Rose works.

Thank you so much on your lovely review!


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Review #2, by TheWizardingPorcupine 

21st August 2013:
I think all your writing is great. It makes me wonder: what was wrong with the pie?

Author's Response: Why thank you, I'm flattered that you think that. There wasn't anything wrong with the pie -I apologize if I made it come across like that- it's just that Lily, Rose and Albus weren't allowed to eat it.

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