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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by pennyardelle 

30th October 2009:
Happy Staff Appreciation Day! I love Lily and James, and I love you for writing such a wonderful story about them. I reviewed this chapter because it had the least reviews, but every single one that I click on is fantastic--so well-written, with such a lovely dynamic between all the characters, especially Lily and James. If you ever have the slightest inclination to continue with more chapters, you should go for it!

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Review #2, by CourtneyFaith 

22nd April 2006:
~So Great. I just love the way you have made their relationship flow. So WONDERFUL~

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Review #3, by Jaydah 

19th April 2006:
Yay finally Lily has seem the light! James was so sweet with the girl finding her wand. Very father-like of him. I must read on.. and actually read another chapter in the same day..month haha. Great job Lauren. No I didn't forget about this story! =)

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Review #4, by jlwitch 

17th March 2006:
I've said it before and I'll say it again... I admire your talent

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Review #5, by Sophia Montgomery 

25th February 2006:
'I think you’ve got yourself an admirer.” A truce, she swallowed her pride and anger and offered him a truce, apology’s were unnecessary (and awkward),' No ' in apologies. 'James caught her eye and his hand moved of it’s own volition to his hair, he stopped it just in time and rubbed his neck instead, hoping he’d looked casual.' Its, no '. And of the last bit of James looking after Lily-- haha, teenage hormones. Funny chapter, lovely interactions!! :)

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Review #6, by padfoot and prongs foreva 

30th March 2005:
awwww!!!! i really like their relationship...its really cute....lyl lyl

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Review #7, by Cor_Leonis 

15th December 2004:
So she's finally realizing there could be more to James than he lets on. Finally! Nice job.

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Review #8, by forsakenphoenix 

27th July 2004:
Yess...they're almost civil! I absolutely love how you created a situation that eased their tension. Usually people just write it off and somehow BAM! the next day--they're all lovey dovey and you didn't do that. So I'm glad because you stuck to being original. Your whole story is completely original and not at all like the usual cliché stories. Oh, and thank you for your review on Pages. I wrote another one-shot fic incase you were interested (actually, it's more that I'm desperate for reviews...)

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