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Review #1, by AlexFan 

26th June 2013:
That was some quick thinking on Roxy's part I'll admit. It's actually really impressive that she got them out of that situation. I'd never expect her to be a pick pocket, she just seems too rule abiding to be a pick pocketer. Still, it's pretty cool though.

And people should really stop criticising her heels. They can be very useful you know. And oh my God, what's going to happen with Albus! It's only the beginning of the story and everything is already intense!

Author's Response: Haha quick thinking indeed. Yes about the heel criticism! Look at all the things she gets done despite wearing them. Hmph. Thank you so much!

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Review #2, by navyfail 

28th May 2013:
I love Roxanne and her heels, lol.

And that trick with the mirror reminds me of Once Upon A Time with Emma and The Mad Hatter. If you don't get the reference just ignore I said that. :P

It is only the second chapter and they already got kidnapped. :O I guess they really do what to murder the Minister. And omg, why did it have to me Albus?

Wow, a pick-pocket. Definitely not expected. And I loved Edward's reaction: "'A pick - a pick-pocket?' he stuttered, and Roxanne rolled her eyes before shaking her head."

Edward doesn't seem brave enough to be a Gryffindor but then he doesn't overreact or anything. Maybe we'll see more of his courageous side later on in the story.

The plot is coming along well. Keep writing and updating. :)


Author's Response: tbh i love roxanne's heels too x___x they're like the main character of this story. the main ship is probably roxanne/shoes. SHE'S ONE OF US.

i did not get that reference but OUAT seems to be doing phenomenally well so i'm going to take it as a definite compliment ;D

YEAH I KNOW. dammit roxanne it's barely been 24 hours and you've already managed to mess things up! this is what i wanted to bring in here -- that roxanne, who normally has everything under control, finds that she's out of her element with all the terrible things that keep befalling her family and the Minister, and she's trying desperately to tackle it with the same amount of badassery that she would any other time.


thank you so much i seriously just adore you.

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Review #3, by aquabluez17 

27th May 2013:
OMG!! Wow!! So good!!

Okay okay so I really do love Edward. He's hilarious n he's not the typical guy who's in control and all. I really like how he has such a high post but still is SOO chill. I bet he can totally take care of himself but just doesn't lol

Roxy was in Azkaban?? Danggg! The girl is really hardcore!

Oh yay we get to see Al!! WHOOT :)

Can't wait to see your next update! Great job!!


Author's Response: *hugs you* thank you c: tbh i was not worried about plot or any of the other characters I JUST WANTED ROXANNE TO BE HARDCORE. so you just made my day, clearly. i will update son ;)

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