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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by justonemorefic 

15th July 2013:
"Vicky, I know the concept of deceit is mostly above you, and I’m not expecting a Poker Face here, but you might do better if you stopped showing McDonald your cards." and "And Vicky, do not eat the poker chips." Vicky is seriously on fire (will she be literally on fire? wouldn't doubt it, with this talk of thermodynamics)

Oh my god he's considering teaching actual physics, of all the things, this might be the craziest ARCHIE DON'T DO IT.

“She’s writing her extended project on Twilight,” Archibald grimaced, “and how the supernatural is portrayed in sensationalist young adult novels.” ... Along with the several pages of fanfiction Gina had found on the internet. And the six other books she’d referenced. I AM JUST GOING TO PRETEND IT'S ME :D Oh wait, no can I be dom with her sheep puns, that is actually really impressive. "the shear extent" I am rolling, Helen, rolling. Considering Archie's penchant for punning names, she ought to get full marks.

HAH THEY CHOSE WHITNEY HOUSTON Well, can't fault them for a classic, I guess? Right, I ought to do more than throw your fic back at you - but that paragraph was such a perfect drawl of his thoughts.

“It’s the milkshake, Professor,” -> WHEN I READ THIS I WAS WHISPERING TO THE SCREEN *finish the line finish the line -- yes* And then HE QUIPPED BACK.

AWWW. AWWW HELEN, OMG THAT SPEECH, I'M GETTING TEARY (half from laughing the Professor’s borderline inappropriate love of muggles is still ongoing, She’s blatantly too good for him, oh god the squib thing isn't over yet). On the whole, he wasn’t sure whether or not any of the above had been a compliment or merely a string of insults masquerading as something positive. I'm not sure either, Archie, I'm not sure either.

♥ THIS WAS THE BEST almost conclusion TO THE SCHOOLYEAR :3

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Review #2, by Cirque Du Freak 

5th June 2013:
I LOVE THIS CHAPTER SO MUCH BECAUSE THE AWARD
THE ARTICLE
THE POSTERS
THE MILKSHAKE REFERENCE BETWEEN FRED AND ARCHIE
which is a bit weird (hilariously weird), but lets not comment on that.


I really enjoyed this particular chapter with the whole Muggle party and THE GAMES MUGGLE GAMES andpoor Hugo just keeps getting picked on by Archie (mind-picked but ukno same thing basically) and it makes me feel sorry for him HES JUST A SENSITIVE 13 YEAR OLD BOY. LEAVE HIM ALONE.

Also enjoyed all the extended Muggle Studies projects but still hate Cooper because thermodynamics wut and TWILIGHT AND SHEEP AND really Dom. Sheep. On the feminist movement. Pahahaha

Ronald has barely said anything in his life so that was weird.

And I want to know the story of how Barbie and Squeaky got together. Sounds fabulous really.

WAH ITS OVER AND IM SAD. But this was good and aw yeah fun crack times :D



Author's Response: I COULDN'T FINISH THIS STORY WITHOUT A MILKSHAKE REFERENCE.
It was weird but I did really enjoy it. I had to just shove it in so that was fun. yaayy.
MUGGLE PARTAY. I kind of which I'd had time to write about the pass the parcel but I just didn't so yeah.

Ahhha, Hugo. I love Hugo. He's like Archie's pet dog. Bless. TWILIGHT. That had to be done too.

I'll tell you the story at some point maybe. THANK YOU FOR BEING AWESOME and I love you lots sorry about it being over and what not.


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Review #3, by patronus_charm 

3rd June 2013:
Woo go Shelley! I always liked her and now she’s taken on the roll as Archie’s cheerleader she’s even more awesome :D Thank goodness it’s nearly the end of the school year as that hopefully means I’ll never have to see Elliot again after this chapter, I feel Archie’s pain!

‘He wasn’t teaching anymore. He was babysitting.’ Sorry if I’m wrong Archie but judging by how badly most of your students behave I thought you spent most of your time doing that. Oh my god the idea of them having GCSEs I dread to think what kind of mayhem they would get up to in the muggle world.

I am in love with this line ‘by the beginning of his relationship with the Charming Charms teacher’ is the thing between him and Dionne official then? If so that is possibly one of the cutest things I have ever heard :D I think it’s a good thing Muggle Studies is completed because if Fred’s dropping it, it wouldn’t be the same without him. I mean, how could he leave Dom? I thought they both loved it!

Ok I can’t even say anything I’m laughing too hard! The idea of the muggle party is brilliant and the way Archie’s despairing over it makes me laugh way too much! Then the mention of Katie Price set me off again, what were these parents thinking when they named their children?

I officially died when Archie said this ‘“Damn right, it’s better than yours,” Archibald quipped back,’. Ah he won teacher of the year award and the reasons for him winning were brilliant and Fred’s not leaving and everything’s brilliant again and I’m sitting here feeling jealous of his scented ruler as it sounds infinitely cooler than my non-scented one!

Ok this was possibly my favourite chapter so far ♥

-Kiana

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Review #4, by Rumbleroar goes roar 

7th May 2013:
“It’s the milkshake, Professor,” Fred said from the vicinity of the drinks table, “your milkshake brings all the boys to the yard.”

“Damn right, it’s better than yours,”

Oh this made me laugh so much. As did,
“A novelty ruler,” Dom corrected, “it’s scented.”

In fact, pretty much the entire chapter had me giggling. Seriously keep up the amazing writing - I adore your characters and this wonderful story :)

Author's Response: Aha, I couldn't resist that one. And there are such a thing as scented rulers and it's WEIRD. I can understand scented pens but... rulers. It seems... slightly odd to me.

Glad you liked the chapter :D


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Review #5, by AlexFan 

7th May 2013:
Oh my God, as usual, this was hilarious and I was laughing the entire way through. I can't imagine Archie as anyone but Robert Downey Jr. I just can't, he fits so well into the character now.

I love this fanfiction, I really do, it'll be one of the ones that I'll always come back to read.

Author's Response: I was so pleased when I realised Archie WAS RDJ because I'm usually rubbish at finding face fits, but it's perfect.

So glad you like the story! You're awesome :D


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Review #6, by WeasleyTwinMom_staff 

6th May 2013:
Very cute story, I enjoyed it. I do want to point out that it's "extra-curricular", not "extra-circular". But really enjoyable story, I like your OC!

Author's Response: Ah, thank you! I'll go fix that up now and I'm really glad you liked it :D

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