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64 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Zorezza 

6th March 2016:
Excellent chapter. The details of her thought process. The failings of heart where we feel contradictory emotions is well captured. This tale rings truer and steadier than ever. I will read it till the end. Please keep adding more chapter to this.

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Review #2, by Camila 

9th August 2014:
I read your story years ago and I just remembered it today. looked everywhere for it, so that I could read it again. imagine my surprise when I find out that it wasn't finished like I thought it was and that you're still working on it?! yes, that was probably the most happy thing that happened this week. you should know that your story made up my mind about the kind of girls I wanted for Sirius and that I'm incapable of enjoying fully any other Sirius/OC story after yours. so please, I beg you to write it; I know it's hard, life gets on the way and we can't always live in HP's reality - but please try and update it. even if next chapter will be the last; I can't live without knowing what happened to her - seriously, I actually was agter it so that I could have some clue about what happend to her or if you had written a sequel. I'm waiting forever, but I need to know. xoxo

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Review #3, by The_Crookshanks_Saga 

25th April 2014:
Yeah, because you definitely posted again this weekend.

Red, stop this madness. Just stop it. You are a Dobby-winning author with practically a fan base of her own, and you're doing this to us? You know, once you win a Dobby and get, like, ten or more chapters though the story, there's like this unwritten law that you have to keep writing. Heard that? Not just leave yor readers at a major cliffhanger for- what, three, four, maybe more years? Honestly.

You're an amazing writer, Red. Your stories just come alive. Mirabelle Rose, Sirius Black, I can imagine them as real people. You've got this magic woven into your words, something unique and so entirely special. So many people here can recognize that.

Look, HarryPotterFanfiction isn't just some place to write for yourself. If you want to do that, don''t bother posting your work, just leave it in your document. Here, we write for others. Sure, every now and then, we abandon or something, but that's after we've lost that initial burst of energy and inspiration. CLoMR is on chapter sixteen, CBaS is on chapter nineteen, Fire and Ice- you've got no excuse, especially with those other tons of stories that you haven't delved more than a few chapters into.

I wish there was some way I could just read through the computer, all those binary codes and the cyberspace, to shake your shoulders and get the message across. Or, atleast send this to your email. But right now, Iíll have to settle for this: a review on a website Iím pretty sure you never check. Maybe if you did, youíd see all your fans, and be inspired to write, or at least considerate enough to check off your account as ďabandonedĒ. Youíve havenít though, so Iím assuming that you havenít been on this site for ages. You really should get back on.

Look, Red, you may have forgotten about Harry Potter Fanfiction. You may have forgotten about Mirabelle, and Sirius, and Alexa, and Avaira, and Rosalie, and Henry, etc. But no one can ever gotten over your writing style. And your fans will sure as hell never overgrow you.

Get back on.


Author's Response: Not forgotten, I promise! College. Study Abroad. Internships. You're review is so sweet and yet honest. I know It's been ages. I graduate in May so I don't know if that will be good or bad for my HPFF writing (or lack thereof). But I have tons of "please updates" and that might just give me that extra burst to get a few of my nearly-finished chapters in posting condition.

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Review #4, by Skyler315 

9th January 2014:
You can't just leave the story off here! I just reread the entire thing, and I really think that you need to update! Please!!! I love this story and this is the worst cliff hanger ever!

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Review #5, by Godric_the_gryffindor 

5th January 2014:
I don't know whether to love this or hate how you ended it because i think I need more and I'm having a slight existential crisis because you sort of left that on a cliffhanger and I feel really lost. Thank you and I hate you for that recent feels attack. I would like to add on a closing note that you have inspired me to re-write/fix/finish my marauders era fanfic, so I thank you because this writes block has lasted 2 years now.

Author's Response: I'm hoping it will comfort you to know that, of all of my stories, this is the one I'm closest to updating. I'm glad I inspired you to get over your writer's block. Hopefully I can break through mine as well.

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Review #6, by Neha 

18th November 2013:
why did u stop writing..its great story..plz finish it..

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Review #7, by SW 

19th October 2013:
Love it. Cant wait for next chapter

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Review #8, by Molly 

9th October 2013:
Great post more please

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Review #9, by a fan of your stories 

23rd September 2013:
Ok, warning before I write this. It may be a bit insensitive.

Red, you have enough talent and this story is so good that you have a Dobby Award for it. You also have over 500 favorites and 400 reviews. It is unfair now to leave us (your devoted fans) for over a year with no new chapters. Especially with a cliffhanger.

Red you are amazing and truly have a gift. Everyone loves your stories. But there's one thing we don't like about you: you never really follow through with it. You leave us on an edge, like with Coming Back a Swan, etc..

Red please update soon. Mirabelle Rose is one of your best fanfics yet and you cannot give it up.

We'll be waiting

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Review #10, by She Whom Must Not Be Named 

22nd September 2013:
PLEASE update soon! You are killing me with suspense!!! Seriously, I have literally been checking for chapter 17 five or six times a day. (I am pathetic ;) )

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Review #11, by TheWizardingPorcupine 

15th September 2013:
Aww man this is such a beautiful sad story it almost made me cry. *sniffs*
No but honestly, this is one of my favorite stories on the site. I feel so sorry for Mirabelle and Sirius. The only bad part is. Actually no, I can't find one. And I'm a major critic.
So, where's Mira going? To Lena or Nora's house, or to the Potters? How is she going to deal with her pureblood society back at Hogwarts (u mentioned that there's a member of the PB society who's a year below her). Is she even gonna go back to Hogwarts?
Is she gonna die, as a tragic story heroine (PLEASE NO!)


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Review #12, by Kat20 

14th August 2013:
Just wondering, are you still writing this or is it abandoned?

Author's Response: Not abandoned, just stuck and a little neglected. I have a long plane flight in a couple of days and I'll probably knock out a chapter (hopefully two or three) while I'm on it because I can't sleep on those!

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Review #13, by Alex 

30th July 2013:
Please please PLEASE update soon!

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Review #14, by Jess 

22nd July 2013:

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Review #15, by Me 

15th July 2013:
NO! You just can't do this! Please update, you've left this story for MONTHS! It's such a good story, and you've left it at a cliffhanger. Please just finish it, at least some more chapters.

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Review #16, by Tapi 

30th May 2013:
Please please please update! The story is incredible, one of the best I've ever read. JK would be proud!

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Review #17, by jmethelin 

7th May 2013:
This is quite possibly the best piece of fanfiction I have ever read. I stumbled across your work by chance and have fallen in love with this story.

I love Mira's character. She is trying her best to survive in a world that doesn't seem to offer her very many viable options. I can't wait to see what happens next. Will she be caught? Will she join The Order and end up being sent back to her family as a spy? I wish she could have a happy ending with Sirius, but since there is a good chance she will have a more tragic end it does make their relationship seem that much more intriguing.

Thank you for writing and sharing this incredible story.

I will keep my eye on this story and will be eagerly awaiting your next update.

- Jme

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Review #18, by Lexi 

5th May 2013:
On Merlin's blessed purple bloomers, UPDATE! Is she going to go to Andy's or Potter's or just what on earth is going to happen?!?!? And that last line- oh my god, it's just like...wow. My vocab just escapes me. It resorted me to squealing 'UPDATE ASAP BECAUSE I'M DYING OVER HERE!' at the top of my voice. Congrats- your awesome and cliffhangery story has left a Ravenclaw mind-blown. Hopefully the next chapter can do just the same! (hint)

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Review #19, by KB 

16th April 2013:
Update Please! You can't leave at like the best cliffhanger ever!

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Review #20, by Izz 

28th March 2013:
Really good! I'm obsessed! When are you uploading the next chapter?! I can't wait!

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Review #21, by a person 

27th February 2013:
UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE UPDATE. Siriusly this is the best fanfiction ever and if you dont update soon i think i will cry xox

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Review #22, by Avis123 

23rd February 2013:
Oh My God. That was bloody amazing. Please write more soon!

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Review #23, by Shadowhunter 

19th February 2013:
Please do not stop writing!! I love every one of your stories -- The Complicated Love Life of Mirabelle Rose, Knowledge and Experience, Swept Under, Coming Back a Swan.the whole lot of them. You truly have a gift, and I really hope you aren't discouraged and have decided to discontinue your stories.
Best of luck, and happy writing!

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Review #24, by Kat 

17th February 2013:
Please Ginny Red! You cannot end a story this good before the climax! Please continue!

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Review #25, by Ginnywhetherby 

5th February 2013:
You can't stop here! I've been waiting for Mira to run away from home for the last five chapters! I want to see where she goes and what Sirius' reaction is! Please please please don't stop

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