6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by gran/ger 

12th October 2012:
I don't think I'm cheating by reviewing yet again. I'm afraid I'm going for the obvious when my favourite bit is the debut of the blonde Slytherin. Be still my bearing heart! So pathetic I know; but I just can't help it.

Author's Response: gran/ger,

Don't worry dear, that was my favorite part too! ;) You're just as pathetic as me!

love always,
jaz xoxo

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Review #2, by Mischief_managed18 

24th June 2012:
Sorry I haven't been around, but I'm back! :D
Lovely chapter. I love the moment she had with her parents while fishing and just the overall way she interacts with them. It was quite well done and I loved it. The ending made me sad, but I think it means the story is moving on, which is always good. :P You're a lovely writer m'dear. :) Keep up the good work!
One thing I'd try if I were you is to have a Beta or to have a friend go through and edit the story. There were several typos and grammatical errors, other than that, I absolutely loved it. :)

Author's Response: It's okay Mischief_Managed, I haven't read yours in a while either. I'll do that soon, i saw there were quite a few chapters added since last time.
Thank you. I love that moment too. Oh why did it make you sad? Thank you again, and so are you! :)
I've been trying to get on the forums, but I've been having trouble. it keeps telling me I'm restricted from everything. I can't even look at me profile. :/ So until I can get one, I'll just go back later and fix them. Thank you for another review. :)
jaz xoxo

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Review #3, by J.L. 

13th June 2012:
I really like it!! I had to reread a few parts because I was reading quickly, and missed things like Hermione tumbling overboard, but that's my bad. I want more :)

Author's Response: J.L.,

yay, i'm so glad to hear that. haha, i hate when i do that when i'm read. :p

more soon i promise!
jaz xoxo

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Review #4, by jesse abedeen 

13th June 2012:
its got me on my toes now. excellent story line. but pleaaazee try to upload the next chapter a little faster than this one.

Author's Response: jeese abedeen,

yay, that means a lot! thanks for reviewing! i promise i will being updating soon, in the next few days at the most. thanks for reviewing!

more soon,
jaz xoxo

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Review #5, by PhoenixFire34 

13th June 2012:
Wow! I love the vampirates books! I just finished rererereading them :P this sounds like such a great mix! Can't wait to read more!

Author's Response: PhoenixFire34,

I loved them too and was inspired by the last book to mix my too favorite book series together. I NEED to reread them as I haven't had the chance yet. Thank you so much for your review!

Hasta la vista,
jaz xoxo

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Review #6, by MiSTY_VoLPe 

3rd June 2012:
Naw thanks for mentioning me in the authors note! It was sweet of you!
THANKYOU for updating the story! Good chapter! Yay Draco saved her :)
Please update soon!
Ps. Ur doing fine so far with the story! Don't worry and keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Misty! Thank you! I really meant what I said in the Authors Note. Your reviews give me encouragement, which is more than I could ask for. Im really glad you think so about this chapter, cause the begining of it was hard for me to put down in words. Yay! Draco saved her! :) I cant wait to post chapter 5, which hint hint, is from his pov. I will update as soon as I fix the kinks in chapter 3 and 4. Ive added some things to them, so youll mit need to reread them. And to the Ps, THANK YOU! :D

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