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6 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Teddylover 

7th May 2012:
YES! Oh my goodness!! I knew it had to be soon! And they weren't drunk! It was perfect. But what's teddy going to do? Ah, I'm so nervous!! Great job!! PLEASE update soon!

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Review #2, by Renfair 

6th May 2012:
Wow, last chapter already! Well, at least last one that's up on site. Obviously the story isn't over. I'm just going to take a wild stab in the dark and guess from reading the chapter title that things are going to get pretty heated soon.

"Really, don't worry. He's gay." Oh! Hahaha...I guess Ted's gay-dar needs a tune-up.

Friends don't let friends Apparate drunk, Ted. Good job. I guess Osiris should have made them leave their wands at the bar, but at least they did take the Floo instead. I would imagine nothing would sober you up quicker than splinching half of your drunk body off. EEK! And then they go swimming? Cringing over here. Glad they're ok!

"We took the sand dollars and pur them back in the water." (put them back. Ugh, I really hate those typos that the spell checker doesn't pick up because it's still a real word, don't you? Super annoying.)

So...this chapter ends with a bang of a cliffhanger and all sorts of questions still open. What WOULD be Ted's dream job? Why did he become an Auror, which requires a ton of training, if he didn't really want to (just to help out Harry, maybe?) What did this Joelle chick do to him? Rose must be serious about that kiss, huh? She's not even drunk anymore. Hmm, we all knew it was going to happen, but that doesn't mean it doesn't still complicate things. Oh I still have a feeling you're gearing up for a BIG betrayal of trust between Ted/Scorpius and Rose once she finds out who he really is. But. I guess we'll have to wait until you write that far.

Great story! It was really nice to read a story from a different time period than what I'm used to with totally different characters. You've done a very good job of balancing the humor with the seriousness of the plot. I think Ted's voice in particular has been very consistent throughout. This was a really nice pairing we had! ~Renny

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Review #3, by ForeverOken 

29th April 2012:
OMFG.

THEY FINALLY KISSED.

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Review #4, by Whoa! 

27th April 2012:
Where is story leading to?...It is really nice..plz post soon:)

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Review #5, by Lillylover22 

27th April 2012:
That was so cute!! Update ssoon 9/10 : )

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Review #6, by AriesGirl40 

27th April 2012:
Awww perfect beginning to a perfect day, Rose kissed Scorpius, ummm I mean Teddy...Oops! What is a guy to do! He's a fool to not kiss her back. Hope Teddy isn't moving in on something that was real.This could kill him in the end.
Enjoyed this chapter, I feel like I'm on vacation! Great chapter:)

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