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5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Teddylover 

7th May 2012:
Wow! Okay smooth recovery. Better than I thought. That was quick thinking. And finally a night out! They really need it. Well, Rose at least. But I think Teddy could use one too. Ahh I just want them to get together! But I hope they don't kiss when they're drunk. That will seem meaningless. Great job! Can't wait to read more.

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Review #2, by Renfair 

6th May 2012:
Oh ok, so it looks like at least Ted wasn't wearing Scorpius's clothes yet. I somehow misread that in the last chapter, so I guess he isn't in too much hot water.

"but she looked as if she had sweated off all of her make up - probably out of sheer fear." --That was a great detail to include.

I guessed correctly that she was mad because the real Scorpius "blew her off." I guess that's a good thing! I mean, imagine how much MORE damage control Teddy would have had to do if Real-Scorpius had started spewing all that serum-induced snogging truth at Rose instead of him? Actually, that would have been funnier. I'm so mean.

Ugh, I'm sorry, but Rose is just so immature! I'm having such a hard time liking her, but *please* take that as a compliment to your writing! You're very consistent with her personality, it's just one that sort of clashes with my own. I kind of want to shake her, yelling, "CHILL OUT! You're on trial for MURDER! Can you please take something seriously for once?" then throw her into the ocean or something. It's just these darn Next-Gen kids, not having any missions of death to worry about as teenagers. Why, when I was YOUR age, Rose, I had already escaped from Death Eaters five times! Really, kids these days have it SO easy...

"I don't serve killers." --Well at least Osiris has some scruples :D And long black hair? Ooh, I like him already ;)

Well, it sounds like they're having a fun night out in a different continent, but I hope it doesn't come back to bite them later :/

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Review #3, by Loony_Scorpy 

23rd April 2012:
Aaah I love that every chapter we learn a little bit more. I will admit that this is an amazing mystery fic! I love mystery stories and there certainly aren't enough really intriguing ones on here (that I've found) but yours definitely makes up for that! Every chapter I'm left at the end going I want to know who did it! What was Rose's involvement/what does she know aaand what's going to happen when (if) Rose finds out about Ted being Scorpius? Aaah but I'll have to wait! :P Amazing chapter as usual ♥ But I'm a bit worried about them being out in the open :/

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Review #4, by Lillylover22 

21st April 2012:
Teddy is starting to relise how much he really cares for rose. I love it. Update soon please 9/10 : )

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Review #5, by AriesGirl40 

20th April 2012:
I remembered the promise. That was stupid of them to have them pass each other in the hall anyway. I'm glad she got an out night, they deserve it/ great chapter!

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