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Review #1, by LittleWelshGirl99 

13th May 2012:
Okay, so I honestly wnated to cry when I read what lily had written about the memorial. It was so beautiful! Lily (or rather, you ;P) has such a talent!

The memorial itself sounds perfect- just the way I'd imagine one. It's surprising how fe next-gens include memorials in their descriptions of the Hogwarts grounds. It just makes so much sense for there to be one.

A SCHOOL NEWSPAPER> GENIUS. I tried to start one once, but no-one was very enthusiastic about it apart from me. I hope Lily has loads of success with it :). Oh and also, Professor Stan is just such a cool name.

Hehe.

I love this chapter, Naida! :3
-Annon x

(PS- I have that OCD thing about chapter lengths too. That, and dirty whiteboards...I just itch to clean them... )

Author's Response: ANNON HI! Sorry for taking so long to respond to you! Ahhh, that's a giant compliment. I dI didn't mean for it to be tht sad, but the words were coming nd then BAM :P Yeah, I always thought there would be a memorial. I mean, it just makes sense. After all Muggle wars, there are memorials built, so why not a Wizard war. I used to be part of a school newspaper! :P Lily will hopefully be successful in her attempts, though. And lol I literally just put something down for that name. I hate coming up with names xD You're the best and I'm glad I'm not alone! ♥

-Naida


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Review #2, by Moonyxluna 

10th April 2012:
Such a wonderful chapter! I can't believe I didn't notice this until now. I really like the change into lily's perspective.

I loved your description of the memorial. When she was reading the inscription from george, I felt her sadness. I wasn't just reading about lily being sad; I felt that pang of emotion that she felt watching her uncle fly away from the school.

And yay for the paper getting started! Brilliant work on this, I really love how it is progressing so far. I can't wait to read more :) And still looking forward to meeting 'him' :)

if anything sounds weird I'm on my iPod and the autocorrect got me!

Author's Response: Ohh, the horrors of ipod autocorrect. You seem to be good, though.

Anyways, I just freaked out a little bit because you're being so awesomely loyal to me and all that (don't worry about not seeing it-it got lost in the 0 hour queue :P)

The memorial description was so fun to write. Insanely fun. Even though it was depressing. But wowww, huge compliment! I'm in awe. Thank you! :D

You're really too nice. Huge thank you! ♥

-Naida


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Review #3, by AC_rules 

4th April 2012:
So you pretty much broke my face.

I know that makes no sense, but oh Naida, here I was thinking I'd take a cheery trip in your direction whilst pretending to revise and then you hit me with this great big pile of SAD (awesomely done, btw, the bit that Lily 'wrote' gave me goose pimples) and then I'm here like NO NOOOTTT FREEED and, well, you didn't give me due warning.

And also, it was in first person and I wasn't expecting it. You're good at it though, really you are. Have you written it before? I'm trying to remember... I know you mostly write third person but Im still a little unsure about this.

So we didn't meet him.

But I love Lily and Hattie and Lily's /plan/. You're making me want to start a school newspaper. The closest I ever got was writing this thing and sticking it to the vending machine anonymously, although it was a big hit.


AHaoijdoajdoiajfojijoas. So, this was great and the fact that this chapter has zero reviews (or at least, it did when i started reading) is nothing sure of a crime. HPffers should be ARRESTED. well, no, that's a lie.

They should all be hugged.

Have a hug, Naida.

And a review.

(and this seems like an eloquent place to end).

AC

Author's Response: Hi there lovely! ♥

I'm very sorry. I just can't seem to get the hang of this whole humor thing. This chapter was more like-TO HELL WITH HUMOR. LILY NEEDS TO SHOW OFF. But yeaahhh, I'll try and be happier next time. Except there's still a lot of sadness. UGH I HAVE YOUR PROBLEM. I CANT HAVE MY CHARACTERS BE HAPPY. But I'm insanely glad you liked Lily's part. She'd be very happy.

The first person was a stupid spur of the moment thing on my part. Lily was just talking to me and it was working and I could hear her thoughts and it just felt right to be inside her head! I have written it before, but you're right, I prefer third person. But this is a story of new and exciting things! (aka, Naida failing at trying to step out of her comfort zone)

And no. We don't meet him :( There was also a serious lack of Ben in this chapter (I really need to get over him because he's not a major character in this!) which makes me sad. I love Ben. For many reasons. I'm already planning a Ben sequel novella thing. OKAY SHUT UP AND STAY ON TOPIC, NAIDA.

Ohh, I knew the school newspaper thing from the start :D I was part of one when I was, what, 10? Something like that. It was a long time ago. And the articles were all weird stuff like "10 people like apples and fifteen like bananas!" Lily's will be much better. And I'm totally stealing that vending machine idea. Except there are no vending machines in Hogwarts. Ermmm...I'll find a subsitiute.

WELL, I think it got lost in the mass updating chapters bonanza spree thing, since I updated this when the queue was 0 hours. So I'm not too fussed :P They should all be hugged.

(Though the fact that Lily was nominated for SOTM just makes everything perfect. I love Ravenclaws. They make my heart happy and my ego go through the wall. Seriously, QTR comments are just one massive LOVE FEST)

But again, getting off topic. I really suck at answering reviews.

But have a hug yourself. Or two.

-Naida


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