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10 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Camille 

24th June 2012:
I think Peakes is the murderer and I think he framed Scorpius and Rose. It adds up. He'll probably make up fake proof that it was Rose and then she'll go to jail for something she didn't do. But I think Peakes is behind all of this. Definetely Peakes. But well done. I'm both amused and annoyed that I don't know everything yet.

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Review #2, by Renfair 

29th April 2012:
Wow, a brief sight of the real Scorpius! It was a bit weird. I keep forgetting that he's still hiding away in the cell and that Teddy isn't really him. :D

"Granted, I also did tend to have a shorter fuse when the full moon was around." --I forgot about the werewolf thing, too! I'm so bad at recalling Next-Gen stuff. Hmmm...I wonder if you'll bring more of that into the story later. After all, it's only been a couple of weeks, so there's time for you to add it in. You know, I never actually thought about what it must have been like for Tonks to be married to a werewolf. It must have been very scary unless they were able to have a reliable source of Wolfsbane Potion. If they did, I guess it would just be kind of a "Ladyhawke" situation (except she just turns her hair pink instead of being transformed into a bird. Much easier to make baby Teddy that way...)

""I understand your reasoning, Lupin, but you can't just go jumping the containees!" --No kidding! Who do you think you are, Detective Stabler in "Law and Order: SVU" or something? :D Good thing for Teddy they need him so badly with his unique ability or else he probably would have just gotten himself thrown off of the case. I understand that he was protective of Rose and all, but he needs to reign it in a bit and look at the bigger picture. Rose is going to be much worse off if he blows this and she ends up spending her life in Azkaban, you know? *sigh* Guys!

So I don't know why, but I just had this sudden thought when Teddy told Peakes it was a guy's voice: What if it was PEAKES? Cause you know, Teddy was talking to Ron, so maybe Peakes, who's the real murderer, went and threatened Rose. Maybe my weird imagination is running away from me.

"Become her lover for all I care." --Holy carp-fishing. This dude seriously has NO ethics, does he? Rose would be truly terrified if she knew what a total creep was in charge of her investigation. I mean, I know he probably didn't mean that literally, but usually you'd think a superior would be instructing his investigator to obtain information in a way that is above reproach.

Teddy creeping into Rose's room and sliding into her bed is just the slightest bit creepy, though I know why he's doing it. But honestly, I was kidding about that stalker comment a few chappies back, Teddy. You didn't need to go all Edward Cullen on me and live up to it. Yikes. :)

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Review #3, by Teddylover 

13th March 2012:
Finally! I'm starting to think Peakes did it. I really am. He wants Harry's job. But why the Minister was killed, I dunno. But he can't kill Harry Potter I guess. Guess I will have to wait to find out! You're keeping me on my toes.

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Review #4, by mashforever 

28th January 2012:
Oh, this is good; brilliant, even! I can't wait to find out what happens next.

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Review #5, by littlemisssnape 

28th January 2012:
They are getting closer! Yeey! Can't wait for the next chappie!

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Review #6, by Lillylover22 

27th January 2012:
Great chapter. Please update soon 9/10 : )

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Review #7, by TheHeirOfSlytherin 

27th January 2012:
I'm seriously starting to think Peakes did it. By that I mean the murder... He's definitely up to something. I'm not sure about who was in the room. I'm so curious to know what going on here. I believe in the last chapter, Rose told whoever it was that she was trying...? Yes? Which also leads me to believe that it's Scorpius that is the truly innocent one who's being framed. Rose has done... Something.

For now. You shall come to see that I make assumptions a lot, I try to guess.

I can't wait for the next chapter! I'm so glad I've finally being able to catch up. This story is amazing!

10/10!

Sam.

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Review #8, by Dizzy73 

27th January 2012:
Awweeh! I love Teddy! Hehe, I can't help it but ship Teddy and Rose now XD

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Review #9, by AriesGirl40 

27th January 2012:
Poor Teddy, he knows someone is lying, but he isn't allowed to take care of the situation the way he would like to. It would be like a wizards version of police brutality. That could kill his career. In my opinion, I don't think that either Rose or Scorpious had anything to do with it. I think someone else framed them both. Now, this new situation, the outcome could go either way. Appreciation for staying close to her after her ordeal in her room, or accuse him of being a pervert. They have spent enough time together, Rose could be beginning to become attached to Ted/Scorp.
Till next chapter :)

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Review #10, by Whoa! 

27th January 2012:
Is this Sco/Ros or Ted/Rose?

And I loved the story!Plz do update!!

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