7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Beeezie 

31st December 2012:
So I am going through making you more CIs (and reading, obviously, since I want to make them at least somewhat appropriate), and right now I want to hug you for the greenhouse every day comment because that is totally what working with living things can be like. I have a friend who worked with fish and genetic engineering, and she had to go in for about an hour almost every day, no matter what else was going on.

Also, this is a great chapter and I love the fact that you didn't let the "I have a girlfriend" line build and cause drama over the course of several chapters before Molly discovered the truth. That would have probably ended up feeling tiresome. This was totally realistic - who hasn't lied at some point or another about having a significant other out of panic? :P

(This is a terrible review, but I'm hoping the CIs make up for my lack of reviewing/poor review. ♥)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for those CIs and the review! You're amazing! And I'm glad you think I captured the greenhouse and her needing to work at least some every day. The way I see it, the world doesn't stop living just because you want a day off.

Yeah, I definitely didn't want that lie to build up, that's why I chose to include Connor in the scene because friends tend to call your lies in front of the person you're lying to. And it definitely wasn't a terrible review because I still enjoyed it. Thanks again!


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Review #2, by Phoenix_Flames 

3rd July 2012:
And I'm back, trying to catch up on this!! :D

Another great chapter, Leslie! AND I LOVE HOW THIS CHAPTER ENDED! With their conversation all throughout the chapter, I knew they couldn't just leave it like that. There was too much history between them. I could feel all of it and their old feelings for each other. I just KNEW it was there, and I think I could feel that both Molly and Finn didn't just want to leave things as 'we ran into each other on the street.' Things had to go on further from there.

And then there at the end! I got so excited! And Molly better not break things off again. Scaredy-cat.

I can't wait to see where things go. Great chapter, Leslie!

Author's Response: Yes, this argument had to happen between them or things wouldn't progress. Both of them, especially Finn, had things to say that had gone unsaid before Molly had left for Australia when they had finished at Hogwarts. I'm glad you're still enjoying the story, Drue, thanks for reviewing!

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Review #3, by Lillylover22 

15th May 2012:
Gah they are adorable!! 9/10 : )

Author's Response: They are, aren't they? Thanks for reading! Glad you're enjoying it! :)

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Review #4, by DarkLadyofSlytherin 

29th April 2012:
at least these two are getting back together. I mean, it would be really bad if she came back and didn't even see him. I'd be mad as hell. Though, I can't wait for the fluff between these two to start up again...and yes, I did just say that.

Molly should not make promises she's not likely to keep.

Otherwise, I absolutely love the chapter. Sorry it took so long to finally get to it.

Love ya!
Len

Author's Response: I'm going to have to hold what you said about fluff, that needs to be written down and permanently enshrined somewhere. :P

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Review #5, by mrd 

16th February 2012:
it has been ages since you updated, needs to happen asap, i love this story

Author's Response: Thanks! The next chapter is up now and I should have Chapter 7 finished later today as I fully intend to get some writing done since I have the whole day/night to write.

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Review #6, by SunSation Gal 07 

24th January 2012:
Well, that started off awkward. But it all worked out, with the help of Connor. :P And now they are going to go out together. Yay!

Author's Response: Yep, incredibly awkward moments are just tons of fun to write. And Connor is definitely turning into my favorite side character to write, he's just fun to write in contrast with Finn. :) Thanks for reviewing, Lee!

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Review #7, by carellio 

21st January 2012:
Yet another great chapter!
I'm so excited they finally talked and their relationship is working it's way back up again :)
Can't wait for the next chapter :)

Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you're still enjoying the chapter and the next is up now! And I should have Chapter 7 finished by later today. :)

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