7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Courtney Dark 

1st February 2014:
Aaaah, you got Lockhart's character down to a tee. He was seriously perfect, and still had just the right amount of confusion!

Scorpius is a fan-girl. Wow. Just wow. See, in some moments I think Scorpius is adorable and sweet and perfect for Rose and in other moments (like these) I can definitely see why Rose isn't particularly into him. And I love that almost twenty chapters in, she still hasn't fallen head over heels in love. It's a nice change from most fanfictions!

I can't believe Rose just accepted Boris into her home. I am anticipating some...interesting situations!


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Review #2, by riddikulus11 

11th May 2013:
Poor Boris :(
Scorpius being a fan girl - face palm but epic still. Sometimes you gotta luv him. Anyway, nice chapter and on I go :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

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Review #3, by PenguinsWillReignSupreme 

20th March 2012:
Are you hurt? These crowds are beastly beastly, I say! - ahahahaha, I love him. He's so WEIRD.

I wasn't in the mood for Azkaban - who is, really? :P

POOR BORIS. WHAT AN EVIL COW OF A WIFE. It's just like my uncle all over again. Horrible stuff. I hope he falls in love with Molly.


Kind of.

Anyway, Scorp awks. I cringed at the kiss and declarations of love. They just don't go. You know who do go, though? YOU KNOW.



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Review #4, by AC_rules 

22nd January 2012:
I saw the chapter summary and I was like BAHHH NO SCORPIUS DON'T DO ITTT!!! And I was half hopingt hat the 'L' word wouldn't be the 'L' word but would be Rose and Scorpy talking about something serious like... lemons. Or Lavenders. BUT NO.

Man, Scorpius is a bit of a fool.

AND THEN I read the second part of the summary and I'd half convinced myself that Rose's new flat mate was going to be Scorpius, and I could just feel all this impending disaster and doom. But, it was okay, because it's just her boss.

I bet that will turn out awkward at some point.

I'd find it very strange to have my boss living in the same place as me.

Anyway, I loved this chapter. I'd gotten a bit behind due to spending a lot of time pretending to revise/work so when I saw your name crop up on the review battle I thought I might as well jump at the chance to review this.

(I agree with Rose, someone saying 'I love you' is just the worst thing ever - poor girl, she needs to man up and sort this stuff out).

And I especially love the last bit about all the moaning, so true of life.


Author's Response: haha thank you so much for the review! Scorpius is a fool, but Rose is a bit too so it's all fine :P

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Review #5, by dirtydeedsdonedirtcheap 

19th January 2012:
Of course Scorpius was a fan-girl, what did I honestly expect? It was tacky and tasteless, so naturally he'd be in with fervour. I'd noticed he'd even put extra gel on his hair today, as if that would impress Lockhart in the slightest.


I'm not done.




Extra gel...fan girl...extra gel...Lockhart...Boris as her new flatmate.

I was convinced it would be Scorpius in an odd turn of events. I don't know I can see him lighting himself on fire or his flat and just ruining everything. But Boris? Rose is really something, that would definitely get the rumor mill going considering Molly said she was dating Boris. Oh wonderful chapter as usual, wonderful, wonderful, wonderful.

Extra hair gel...ah, that was perfect.

Author's Response: Haha, don't ask me where the hair gel came from, but it just seems to fit him so well. ;)

And all I'm going to say in relation to Boris is JUST YOU WAIT AND SEE and throw in an evil laugh.

Thanks for the review!

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Review #6, by Lillylover22 

18th January 2012:
This was great. Poor boris. Update soon please 9/10 : )

Author's Response: Poor Boris indeed, but you'll see soon enough that he's brought this upon himself. Thanks for the review! :)

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Review #7, by Erised 

18th January 2012:
Another fab chapter! You do awkward like it's going out of style. Seriously, you're great at it. I literally cringed at the whole Scorp meeting in the middle of the shop. You have turned him into a MONSTER.

I felt really sorry for Boris too! Poor thing. I just wanted to give him a cuddle. Also, loving the whole characterisation of Lockhart. He's still a creep...

I have a teeny tiny criticism. Some of the dialogue sounded a little stiff, but I only noticed it when Lily was talking. Therefore, it didn't happen. *hides*


Author's Response: Awkward will never go out of style while I'm still here, I hope :P He is such a monster, but he just HAS to be. He's Scorp!

Well, if it's JUST Lily I daresay it was deliberate, because she's a bit of a stiff in my head, but if not I'll have to go in and natural-ify it :D

thanks for the review lovely!

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