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8 Reviews Found

Review #1, by DumbledoresArmyOfOne 

20th July 2012:
I really like the story so far,although I did fnd a continuity problem. Teddy said that he'd never seen rose cry before, but you said that she was crying when they were first taken to the cottage.
Great chapter, I'm itching to know what this intruder is up to and who it is...
~Gill

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Review #2, by Renfair 

28th April 2012:
Well, Scorpius may be being stubborn in the Ministry's eyes, but it sounds to me like he's one of the only ones being smart. Good for him to keep his mouth shut and hopefully let his lawyer do the talking. I wouldn't say a word to any Ministry people with the way that place is being run. Sheesh.

'She would begin to question that someone else was watching over us while we were at the house." --Well, yes, but should she be surprised by that? I mean, they are kind of wanted for murder and all that. Who knows with Rose. She might be all kick-butt with her curse-breaking, but she still comes across as slightly immature to me. Maybe it's just cause I'm getting totally old like Teddy.

Um, yeah, a 1,000 galleon bonus is pretty sweet. That's about $10,000, right? *I'd* walk around as Scorpius Malfoy for a few days for that much money :D

"Ron was never good at the whole encouragement front." Yeah, no kidding. Though I constantly have to remind myself that book-Ron wasn't as much of an idiot as movie-Ron. But I still always shake my head over the idea of Hermione dumping Viktor Krum for the Weasel.

The part when Teddy arrived back at the cottage and found his door open was well written. I think everyone's had one of those, "Oh %#&$" moments in their life. Though really, he probably should have found a better alibi than smooth jazz ;) You also created a nice level of suspense when Rose was trapped in her room with Mystery Man. Maybe someone who actually was involved in the murder? Hmm...interesting. I'm guessing she must be really scared to not only make up such lame lies but also hug "Scorpius." I think that anti-Apparating spell would probably be a good thing to implement now, Teddy...

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Review #3, by Teddylover 

13th March 2012:
Oh my gosh. What's gonna happen! This chapter was so intense. I thought this story cooled off a little but this chapter totally proved me wrong! Who was in there? This chapter makes me wonder if Rosw actually did it. Good job!

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Review #4, by Lillylover22 

17th January 2012:
What is going on with rose 9/10 : )

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Review #5, by Houlestar 

12th January 2012:
Teddy's conversation with Ron was amazing. Ron really seemed like good ol' Ron from back at Hogwarts, and Teddy's commentary on how the case was being handled was delightful. I really enjoyed reading it.

And the drama and mystery back with Rose. I really want to find out what happens next so forgive me for leaving a short review, but I'm really curious and really want to read more.
-Houlestar

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Review #6, by littlemisssnape 

24th November 2011:
This is looking really interesting. Please update soon :)

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Review #7, by Crescent Moon  

22nd November 2011:
Great chapter, I really want to find out who was in with Rose. And was he (for some reason I think it's a he) involved in the murder?
I can't wait to read the next chapter, please update as soon as you can.

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Review #8, by mashforever 

21st November 2011:
This is really heating up! I'll be waiting with bated breath for the next chapter!! :)

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