7 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Courtney Dark 

23rd January 2014:
Oh, I love this story so much!

And I know I say that at the start of pretty much every review, but it's true! And I feel the need to express my feelings and whatnot.

The bookshop scene was so bizarre! Boris's mother is certainly an interesting character! And I think Rose dealt with her pretty well! I would not have nearly so much patience.

Oh, I love Rose and Scorpius so much, particularly the way you have characterized them. They're both so different! Scorpius is kinda innocent and nice and awkward, while Rose has a bit of a temper. They're basically opposites, though they have one big thing in common: they're both pretty socially awkward.

And can I just say, wow, I was not expecting Hermione to show up! I would be extremely concerned if I were Rose!


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Review #2, by Lillylover22 

17th January 2012:
Why does hermione visit scorp so much. 9/10 : )

Author's Response: She likes scorp too much, I think :P

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Review #3, by AC_rules 

25th September 2011:
Ahhha, Rose just can't help walking into awkward situations can she. I think, if I were her, I'd be verrryyy confused about Scorpius lending books to her mum. That's really weird. I'd be creeped out. Scorpius is a sweetie and I missed Molly in this chapter. I'm loving Roses's boss more and more though :)


Author's Response: I missed Molly in this chapter, too! Thanks for reviewing :)

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Review #4, by scarlettandgold 

29th August 2011:
This story is so adorably funny! I love Rose's character because she's so lovably awkward and plain and most of all normal! That's something I (and I'm sure many other authors) struggle with - making real characters, and you do that wonderfully! I really like the change in Scorpius's character as well. I'm excited for the upcoming chapters and Sco/Rose interactions which are actually talking and not super awkward, haha. Also, I love your sense of humor because you bring it up in the most random places and it's wonderful! It's a more subtle kind of humor and I love it! Especially the soap part in a previous chapter, I actually laughed out loud (with some odd looks from my family nonetheless) but I'm really excited to see what happens with them next! Amazing job so far with this! ^_^

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you enjoyed it! I love writing this - it's so far out of my comfort zone, but I can't believe how much I enjoy it. I'm glad you enjoyed it to. The great thing about it is that I can include some really insane stuff (like the soap) and make it sound reasonable. It's as crazy as I want it to be and I really love that, haha. Thank you so much :)

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Review #5, by Rose_Weasley324 

15th August 2011:
I loved when she just randomly kissed him :) update soon please!

Author's Response: thank you! I will :)

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Review #6, by PenguinsWillReignSupreme 

13th August 2011:

I love you so much. You're so funny and you just don't see it. Your modesty knows no bounds. These silly situations would be nothing if you didn't have complete control of the characters and their limits.

I was thoroughly disappointed, however, with the lack of Molly. You know how much I love her and her wonderful advice and biscuityness. I loved Hermione's cameo and Boris's dotty old mother. Rose being mistaken for a man was genius and...urgh, I'm so jealous of your execution. The timing is brilliant.



Author's Response: MOLLY WAS THERE!!! In the first three versions, she was in all of them! She was even cheating at Scrabble. You'd have loved it, except it was completely pointless and rambly. Much like this chapter was ;) ahhaha thank you for the help, thank you for the review and thank you for always supporting and encouraging me.


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Review #7, by Erised 

12th August 2011:
OKay, I'm going to try and put this into coherent sentences. Also, I never knew you were funny Marms! Shame about the face. ;)

I'll start with my fave line: "She was still mistaking me for a man; what did I have to do, take my top off?" PAHAHAHAH! I did a weird snort of laughter when I read it. Attractive, I know.

Rose has suddenly taken a turn in this hasn't she? Liking Scorpius' company now? By the way, I will never forgive you for making him ugly. Ever. He is destined to be the hottest character on the planet. You silly. Also, Boris was so hilaro in this! If a little random... also, loving the fact that you used my book suggestion ;)

The whole scene with Hermione and Rose both at Scorpius' house was crazy awkward too, I loved it. Good job there my dear.

This is so random. Um, goodbye.



Author's Response: Jenny I actually love you. Knowing that you enjoy this is a massive compliment and I hope you continue to enjoy it :)

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