5 Reviews Found

Review #1, by Padfoot_Prongs 

21st August 2011:
Oh, Arthur, :D
He is simply adorable!
Ooh, that's interesting, about Peter's nightmare with the silver hand. I like that you've put that there, quite a lot, actually, :)
Oh Lord, Trelawney's prediction. That's crazy!
Gosh, they're so cute. Just. Guh. Lily is such a sweetheart, and I so wish Severus had kept that promise.
This was excellent, I really love seeing Sirius as a dog. I can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! Please, please keep reading, I promise there are really good things stewing for chapters three and four!

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Review #2, by coyote_shivers 

14th August 2011:
Loved this chapter! I think it's great how you can see Sirius and Narcissa drifting apart already. The metro side of Luscious Lucius and the sensitive side of Snape were both excellent, and I love how, right now, Peter is the best member out of Moony, Wormtail, and Prongs. When Sirius talks about how Narcissa is the only family member he's got left, what about Andromeda? She marries a Muggle-born, so she's clearly not a "crazy pureblood git?" How does he feel about her?

Author's Response: So glad you liked it! I decided not to focus on Andromeda in my story, because I think she's a bit boring. Like, blah blah she's in gryffindor and so is Sirius, how cliche. I probably won't really mention her but Bellatrix is going to be in chapter 3 or 4! I thought it'd be more interesting if Narcissa and Sirius used to be friends.

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Review #3, by Queenie Shacklebolt 

13th August 2011:
As Sirius would probably say " bloody brilliant!" I looove the parts with Lily and Snape, I think that's how their friendship really was, them both sort of having a crush on each other, but neither wanting to admit. Also, the part with Trelawney's prediction was very mysterious and creepy; great job! I also like learning what Sirius would get each of his friends for Christmas, and I love Arthur being in the story.

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Review #4, by MJ 

13th August 2011:
Excellent writing. I love the sentimental side of Snape that is never seen.

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Review #5, by SJDay 

12th August 2011:
I love Lucius. I can totally see him that way. God, he's such a prat.
This is so good because its believable, and I really liked that it could have actually happened.
Great job :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I really appreciate it! Chapters 3 and 4 will be up very soon. I'll be sure to check out your author's page and leave you some reviews!

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