3 Reviews Found

Review #1, by BKL8008 

13th November 2012:
That ending was a killer.
perhaps THE best ending to a short story I have ever read.
And Draco? What a characterization. One literally feels so much for him, paradoxically - pity and fear of him in the same breath.
I have to say, the best of the collab's on a character I've read.

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Review #2, by jai917 

12th September 2011:
Wow. This was a very strong piece. I enjoyed reading it :)

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Review #3, by Alexandra 

7th August 2011:
Your characterisation was good, Draco didn't seem too 'soft' or so full of regrets he can't handle it which a lot of people do. You spoke about reaching goals, a very Slytherin-y thing to do.

If I'm honest, I didn't fully understand this sentence "And you, I would have slept sounder afterwards." It might just be the fact I haven't slept for about a day. I read it as being Draco talking to the reader which, if I'm right, was a really clever thing to do! If I'm not, ignore this!

Your description of the Dark Arts is good, very reminiscent of Snape's speech in HBP. It was a really unique and interesting way of tacking Draco after the war. I've read so many fics where Draco is suddenly Mr Charitable man of the year. I also think it was well written how Draco's own thoughts were becoming that same insanity that you say Nott, Goyle and Pansy suffered but he's managing to fight it off.

I really enjoyed reading this take on Draco. Well done!
PantherAlexandra - Slytherin

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