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2 Reviews Found

Review #1, by FriendofMolly 

2nd August 2012:
I think your concept is good. If I were you I would either get a beta reader (helps with editing and strengthens stories). You can find one here on the site. You also might want to keep the books handy to use as reference. I really do think you can have a enjoyable story.
FoM

Author's Response: hey FriendofMolly.
I know I need a beta reader, I guess i'm just to lazy to find one, I will try to get one though. And I do have all the books and try to use them as much as possible. Thankyou for reviewing and the constructive criticism.


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Review #2, by L. L. Potter 

12th May 2011:
Great! Really Good start.I liked how you kept the paragraphs short and I liked how they were getting rid of voldemort. I bet he would not have liked that. You might want too work on your description of the book and pay a bit more attention to detail!

9/10

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing!

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